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for Hell to your doorstep (My Revised Lyrics)

12/14/2016 c1 The Count of Monte Rainbow
Personally I find the original lyrics to be a lot better. In your attempt to re imagine what is already a very good and powerful song you took out a lot of the emotion and made it way more cliche then it needed to be.
2/28/2016 c1 2crweiss2011
Also, if their are any grammatical errors in the story, I apologize, and I hope to fix that.

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