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for You're Number One to Me Luigi X Reader One Shot

7/30/2018 c1 Mel
Yahoo! * Grabs Luigi and look at Daisy * Sorry but he's mine. * Gets chased by Daisy *
3/2/2017 c1 7Junior BLD
This is an interesting concept, and you did a pretty good job writing it.

I think you might want to take out the "your name," parts. It kind of distracted from the reading, at least for me. Maybe what you could do is write something like 'he whispered your name' after a piece of dialogue, or something. Just a suggestion. :-)

Anyway, I really enjoyed this! Great job!
2/21/2017 c1 16NormanWhitesmith
Good job, especially for your first time! Keep up the great work, because I can see some potential in you! Keep writing!
1/1/2017 c1 1MuckyRubberDucky
That was adorable! 3
8/26/2016 c1 SpeakLittleFandoms
Cute! I absolutely love Luigi x3

I think I'd rather be a close friend to him, than a lover, but, hey, :P I'll take it either way xD

But for real, this was super cute, good job :D
4/8/2016 c1 92Shana Hager
Awww...that was just wonderful!
2/29/2016 c1 4EAParakeet
This is cute and sweet
2/29/2016 c1 1Poltergust6000
Awww this is actually cute... I've always wanted everyone's fave man in green as a good friend! And hey, what's good about this website is no matter what kind of feedback you get on this, you stay anonymous! I thought the ending was super sweet. :)

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