for What's it Called?5/2/2020 c1 Guest
El monte ebbot referencia a undertale o que?
El monte ebbot referencia a undertale o que?
4/10/2019 c6 VarroWayland
I love this fic.
Also, in my opinion, Sans is absolutely hilarious, just in a different way, and that's great!
I love this fic.
Also, in my opinion, Sans is absolutely hilarious, just in a different way, and that's great!
4/9/2019 c1 VarroWayland
Almost heaven, West Virginia
Blue Ridge Mountains, Shenandoah River
Life is old there, older than the trees
Younger than the mountains, blowing like a breeze
Country roads, take me home
To the place I belong
West Virginia, mountain mama
Take me home, country roads
All my memories gather round her
Miner's lady, stranger to blue water
Dark and dusty, painted on the sky
Misty taste of moonshine, teardrop in my eye
Country roads, take me home
To the place I belong
West Virginia, mountain mama
Take me home, country roads
I hear her voice, in the morning hour she calls me
The radio reminds me of my home far away
And driving down the road I get a feeling
That I should have been home yesterday, yesterday
Country roads, take me home
To the place I belong
West Virginia, mountain mama
Take me home, country roads
Country roads, take me home
To the place I belong
West Virginia, mountain mama
Take me home, country roads
Take me home, down country roads
Take me home, down country roads
...
I'm Sorry
...
good fic so far tho
Almost heaven, West Virginia
Blue Ridge Mountains, Shenandoah River
Life is old there, older than the trees
Younger than the mountains, blowing like a breeze
Country roads, take me home
To the place I belong
West Virginia, mountain mama
Take me home, country roads
All my memories gather round her
Miner's lady, stranger to blue water
Dark and dusty, painted on the sky
Misty taste of moonshine, teardrop in my eye
Country roads, take me home
To the place I belong
West Virginia, mountain mama
Take me home, country roads
I hear her voice, in the morning hour she calls me
The radio reminds me of my home far away
And driving down the road I get a feeling
That I should have been home yesterday, yesterday
Country roads, take me home
To the place I belong
West Virginia, mountain mama
Take me home, country roads
Country roads, take me home
To the place I belong
West Virginia, mountain mama
Take me home, country roads
Take me home, down country roads
Take me home, down country roads
...
I'm Sorry
...
good fic so far tho
2/27/2017 c1 SnowLabrador
I'm not familiar with Undertale, sorry. But this is good TBG writing all the same!
I'm not familiar with Undertale, sorry. But this is good TBG writing all the same!
3/23/2016 c6 PichuAlt3
The last chapter went a bit too quickly, and it felt like half of the story was across a tenth of the words. Nonetheless, I enjoyed reading this, and it gave me something to do until I get my copy of Pokkén tomorrow.
The last chapter went a bit too quickly, and it felt like half of the story was across a tenth of the words. Nonetheless, I enjoyed reading this, and it gave me something to do until I get my copy of Pokkén tomorrow.
3/23/2016 c4 PichuAlt3
Is the brat that keeps being mentioned the protagonist from Undertale after a bunch of resets or something?
Is the brat that keeps being mentioned the protagonist from Undertale after a bunch of resets or something?
3/22/2016 c3 PichuAlt3
If this is properly based off of Undertale and not just loosely, then I may have a reason to play it.
If this is properly based off of Undertale and not just loosely, then I may have a reason to play it.
3/22/2016 c2 PichuAlt3
Was Ben sharing his name with Ryan's club a coincidence or intentional overlap?
That aside, the way you disregarded realism to make it like living in a game with saving and whatnot was certainly different than most fanfics, so it gets uniqueness points.
Was Ben sharing his name with Ryan's club a coincidence or intentional overlap?
That aside, the way you disregarded realism to make it like living in a game with saving and whatnot was certainly different than most fanfics, so it gets uniqueness points.
3/22/2016 c6 
1TheRedGamingShark
Great story! Loved the characters and plot twist's that happened throughout the story! Thanks for the read~ :D
1TheRedGamingSharkGreat story! Loved the characters and plot twist's that happened throughout the story! Thanks for the read~ :D
3/22/2016 c1 PichuAlt3
Well, I've never played Undertale because I honestly didn't think it looked like much fun, at least in comparison to PMD and SSB. However, this was entertaining to read, and that's good enough.
Well, I've never played Undertale because I honestly didn't think it looked like much fun, at least in comparison to PMD and SSB. However, this was entertaining to read, and that's good enough.
3/14/2016 c1 Grammar Nazi
Consider getting someone to proofread your writing before posting. The story isn't too bad but when the second sentence of the story is grammatically incorrect (or at least awkward) it can tend to be a turn off.
Consider getting someone to proofread your writing before posting. The story isn't too bad but when the second sentence of the story is grammatically incorrect (or at least awkward) it can tend to be a turn off.