for Spineless7/15/2018 c1 Guest
Edward and bookish are horrible people...i hate people like them. Disgusting.
Edward and bookish are horrible people...i hate people like them. Disgusting.
12/8/2017 c1 Guest
It wasn't "right" in the end. He meets Bella the day after he fucks his whore, cheating on his wife, and also the very day he LEAVES his wife. How in the actual fuck is that right?
It wasn't "right" in the end. He meets Bella the day after he fucks his whore, cheating on his wife, and also the very day he LEAVES his wife. How in the actual fuck is that right?
5/24/2017 c1 
3reve2weaver
Usually 'gotcha' endings don't work for me but this fic was so well crafted: Edward's ambivalence and guilt, the dilemma, and all the wrong reasons for having an affair woven into the text like expert bondage. Because of this, the ending really worked. The writing was superb. Congrats.
3reve2weaverUsually 'gotcha' endings don't work for me but this fic was so well crafted: Edward's ambivalence and guilt, the dilemma, and all the wrong reasons for having an affair woven into the text like expert bondage. Because of this, the ending really worked. The writing was superb. Congrats.
8/11/2016 c1 Nannyjojo
Well that was interesting.
Kept us guessing for sure.
Certainly had me intrigued.
Well that was interesting.
Kept us guessing for sure.
Certainly had me intrigued.
7/15/2016 c1 2Capricorn75
Welp, nobody wins in situations like this. I've been on both sides of the coin, not that I'm proud of that, and neither one is a fun place to be.
2Capricorn75Welp, nobody wins in situations like this. I've been on both sides of the coin, not that I'm proud of that, and neither one is a fun place to be.
5/3/2016 c1 jk
right in the end my ass...like bella deserves a Edward that is not only fucking married,,but also cheating on his wife? FUCK THAT
right in the end my ass...like bella deserves a Edward that is not only fucking married,,but also cheating on his wife? FUCK THAT
3/27/2016 c1 Denny52
Wow. Talk about a story begging for more. Great plot line and the un-named characters worked perfectly. Felt sorry for "B" though. Edward is one very confused guy searching for something that he's not even sure of what it is. Certainly he hasn't found it yet. Or maybe...
Wow. Talk about a story begging for more. Great plot line and the un-named characters worked perfectly. Felt sorry for "B" though. Edward is one very confused guy searching for something that he's not even sure of what it is. Certainly he hasn't found it yet. Or maybe...
3/16/2016 c1 1movieandbookgirl
Great story and unexpected ending. Lol. I was guessing the whole time which one was Bella only to find out neither were! Lol. I enjoyed it.
1movieandbookgirlGreat story and unexpected ending. Lol. I was guessing the whole time which one was Bella only to find out neither were! Lol. I enjoyed it.
3/6/2016 c1 jackiehydelover
This was one of my favorites from the contest. Would love it if you decided to continue this one shot. I'm interesting in hearing what Bella's story is :)
This was one of my favorites from the contest. Would love it if you decided to continue this one shot. I'm interesting in hearing what Bella's story is :)