
3/5/2016 c1 catspats31
Okay. I can see this happening when Hoagie and Abby are teenagers. I'm not sure how old they are in this story, but I suppose the one shot between them is okay. Your writing quality is great in terms of the spelling and grammar.
Okay. I can see this happening when Hoagie and Abby are teenagers. I'm not sure how old they are in this story, but I suppose the one shot between them is okay. Your writing quality is great in terms of the spelling and grammar.
3/4/2016 c1
60Numbuh Phenon
This was really cute. My favorite part had to be Hoagie asking Siri Abby's name, that was super clever. Great work!

This was really cute. My favorite part had to be Hoagie asking Siri Abby's name, that was super clever. Great work!
3/3/2016 c1
228storyteller362
That's adorable, I mean really! It's something that I can see hoagie doing.

That's adorable, I mean really! It's something that I can see hoagie doing.