7/29/2016 c5 Lady
It's ok I don't blame you if there are slower updates I ounce couldn't use my kindle, the computer , and the TV for a month because I "didn't" tell my mom about a dinosaur project even though I did pretty sure she just wasn't paying attention :(
It's ok I don't blame you if there are slower updates I ounce couldn't use my kindle, the computer , and the TV for a month because I "didn't" tell my mom about a dinosaur project even though I did pretty sure she just wasn't paying attention :(
7/29/2016 c4 Light
U story is amazing and I don't mind if u take a bit of time to update And sorry u got detention I've never been in detention in my life sooooooooooooooooo
U story is amazing and I don't mind if u take a bit of time to update And sorry u got detention I've never been in detention in my life sooooooooooooooooo
6/19/2016 c11 1ForeverFoxy7
Nice story. Is it going to be mainly focused around Percy or will there be some Percabeth? Just a suggestion, but maybe you should focus on the characters instead of the plot sort of... but I get that's kind of hard since you don't have much time to write and the chapters are short. But great story! Glad you made it so far.
Nice story. Is it going to be mainly focused around Percy or will there be some Percabeth? Just a suggestion, but maybe you should focus on the characters instead of the plot sort of... but I get that's kind of hard since you don't have much time to write and the chapters are short. But great story! Glad you made it so far.
5/21/2016 c11 94Jedi Jelsa777
This is good, I'm not really a fan of stories following the path of the books/movies/tv shows but changing some things, but this one isn't to bad :) I just have a hard time picturing Percy being so aggressive, but still your writing style is different and I mean that in a good way. I bet I could pick your story out of a crowd is what I mean.
This is good, I'm not really a fan of stories following the path of the books/movies/tv shows but changing some things, but this one isn't to bad :) I just have a hard time picturing Percy being so aggressive, but still your writing style is different and I mean that in a good way. I bet I could pick your story out of a crowd is what I mean.
5/17/2016 c11 2Phantomsoul2015
Writing quality could be better good basis though one of the better Percy origin stories I've come across
Writing quality could be better good basis though one of the better Percy origin stories I've come across
5/2/2016 c10 Guest
Are you ever going to update are you ever going to update
Are you ever going to update are you ever going to update
4/29/2016 c10 M164
Are you ever going to update
Are you ever going to update
4/18/2016 c10 Msmile
Percy trains finally getting to the top of the climbing wall he practices archery in the forest secretly because children if Posidon aren't supposed to be good at archery and he practices sword fighting with Ares cabin
Percy trains finally getting to the top of the climbing wall he practices archery in the forest secretly because children if Posidon aren't supposed to be good at archery and he practices sword fighting with Ares cabin