for Red Roses, White Scales1/16/2022 c3 
4PoofyOhio
Solid nope. Not reading this any further; too many grammatical mistakes, the writing is bland and incredibly lacking in descriptions unless it’s about a characters looks, the dialogue is a mixture of meh and extremely cringy, Mikhail is too perfect and acts like a cookie cutter anime protagonist, Yang literally checked out her younger brother; that’s a level of degeneracy I’m not wanting from a RWBY fic.
All in all, not for me. Others may like it, but I do not.
4PoofyOhioSolid nope. Not reading this any further; too many grammatical mistakes, the writing is bland and incredibly lacking in descriptions unless it’s about a characters looks, the dialogue is a mixture of meh and extremely cringy, Mikhail is too perfect and acts like a cookie cutter anime protagonist, Yang literally checked out her younger brother; that’s a level of degeneracy I’m not wanting from a RWBY fic.
All in all, not for me. Others may like it, but I do not.
1/19/2018 c7 Capt. Schroller
Mikhail to me has probably hit the jackpot on his wish. He got to be born into loving caring family that had a wonderful mother and probably the best and kindness sisters that adore him and want him safe. Also, if I am wrong, Mikhail was born into a world a lot better then the one he left.
Mikhail to me has probably hit the jackpot on his wish. He got to be born into loving caring family that had a wonderful mother and probably the best and kindness sisters that adore him and want him safe. Also, if I am wrong, Mikhail was born into a world a lot better then the one he left.
7/9/2017 c6 Comet
Yang: No need to act so formal Weiss after all...I've...seen...you...naked
Yang: No need to act so formal Weiss after all...I've...seen...you...naked
11/16/2016 c3 1jordanlink7856
This honestly sounds a lot like another crossover story, I just can't put my finger on it
1jordanlink7856This honestly sounds a lot like another crossover story, I just can't put my finger on it
10/25/2016 c26 1Tsunashi777
Thank you for writing this wonderful story , KhaosKhan. I hope you will update this story soon .
Also . Good luck you with to settle your problems
1Tsunashi777Thank you for writing this wonderful story , KhaosKhan. I hope you will update this story soon .
Also . Good luck you with to settle your problems
10/23/2016 c26 3PersonaQeminod1
Good luck on coming backing. Hope the new person can be able to do justice for your work and doesn't do anything that well cause people to want to delete your work. Wish i could do this for, but I have a bit of stuff to do too.
3PersonaQeminod1Good luck on coming backing. Hope the new person can be able to do justice for your work and doesn't do anything that well cause people to want to delete your work. Wish i could do this for, but I have a bit of stuff to do too.