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1/10 c24 Alya1188
HI, ICH HOFFE DU SCHREIBST BALD WEITER: MÖCHTE GERNE WISSEN WIE ES WEITER GEHT:

LG ALYA88
11/12/2020 c12 1FearThePuggles
I... I have no idea what to think of that... The rats... and roaches... what was that poor child's life?!
6/4/2020 c24 KyRa-ChAn008
SQUEE! I knew that they were going to have twins! I loved it! Cant wait to see more! As for names I think it would be hilarious to see Harry try and convince Raizen to name one Dionysus XD
6/3/2020 c24 WolvesLAF19
I love this story and am Looking forward to seeing the rest of the story.
6/3/2020 c24 1Shadow Wolf 15846
lol! Yusuke loves to put his foot in it, doesn't he. cant wait for the net chapter.
5/30/2020 c1 yanomichi
por favor actualizarlo me encanta
4/1/2020 c23 Trixia Oliver
Nunca me arrependo de ter ido mais para frente nas paginas de fanfics de HP xYUYU, porque foi lá que eu achei essa magnifica história! Eu simplesmente amei toda a temática, eu ainda tenho esperança de que algum dia você possa talvez vir a concluir, mas mesmo sem finalizar é uma história incrivel! Eu adoro o fato de que não é centrada no Yusuke ou na gangue original de YUYU, mas no Raizen, que é um personagem tão francamente explorado na história em si. Os dois formam um casal perfeito, ainda que eu ache que o Harry esteja um pouco franco demais, mas então eu lembro que eles são DEMONIOS e que isso é esperado, essa diferença de poder, porque por mais que Harry seja um Mazoku, ele não foi treinado como um, nem sabe controlar ou quais são especificadamente seus poderes. Confesso que fiquei um pouco confusa com o background do Harry, a história da familia dele, mas não foi tão inteiramente relevante para a história como um todo, meio que deu para entender e levar para frente a leitura. Já li a fanfic muitas vezes, novamente, é simplesmente incrivel! Linda mesmo! Parabéns pela ótima história.
3/24/2020 c4 loleo
it is a good story plot, but it pissed me oft, how many grammar and spelling mistakes are made.
is there no Beta reader?
some sentences are so convoluted, that you don't know what they mean and it looks like there will be more of it in the upcomming future text.
shit to read, really, look for a good Beta reader, who knows their English!
1/20/2020 c23 WolvesLAF19
I really like this story. I am looking forward to how you continue it. Are Harry’s parents going to show up at some point? Will Raizen ever find out that Harry is only a teenager in a human lifetime not a demon one? I really want know how this story continues and how it ends.
1/4/2020 c23 3shikilove
I have read this story at least 10 times I absolutely love it! I really hope you update sometime soon.
12/30/2019 c23 lupastorm83
This is really great. I love how you make the characters come to life. I look foreword to reading about the possible twin kits? I hope I guessed that right. and reading another wonderful chapter. Truly inspired piece of art. Thank you for sharing this.
10/12/2019 c23 ChiakiSagami
i really really absolutely love this story and hope that you'll continue this
7/24/2019 c23 yanomichi
porfa actualiza que quiero saber que pasa ssssssssssssssiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
7/19/2019 c23 1S.E.X243
More!
7/4/2019 c23 WolvesLAF19
Love the story. Hope you update soon!
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