for Bridges and Bonds11/9/2016 c13 CameronEmma
I'm reading this on the day following the elections so even though the review is late i'm glad i waited to read this to confort me. I really liked the part when Arisu saw her sister break down. The description with the worms and all gave me shivers. I'm glad that Takeru is starting to thaw a bit and seems willing to hang out with the girls even if he is prickly!
I don't remember if I asked this, and it I had i'm sorry you don't need to answer it, but will you develop the pasts of each gods too? In the show we don't know why Dionysus and Thor are there so i'm guessing that it would make more work for you.
I'm glad to hear that you are thinking about publishing! Have you started your novel yet? If yes how far along are you in your first or xth draft? I'd be willing to beta read for you if it isn't a horror story! Hahaha ;)
Is there another place online to read more of your works or just follow you? You seem like and interesting person. :)
Well have a nice day and good luck on your next chapter!
-CameronEmma
I'm reading this on the day following the elections so even though the review is late i'm glad i waited to read this to confort me. I really liked the part when Arisu saw her sister break down. The description with the worms and all gave me shivers. I'm glad that Takeru is starting to thaw a bit and seems willing to hang out with the girls even if he is prickly!
I don't remember if I asked this, and it I had i'm sorry you don't need to answer it, but will you develop the pasts of each gods too? In the show we don't know why Dionysus and Thor are there so i'm guessing that it would make more work for you.
I'm glad to hear that you are thinking about publishing! Have you started your novel yet? If yes how far along are you in your first or xth draft? I'd be willing to beta read for you if it isn't a horror story! Hahaha ;)
Is there another place online to read more of your works or just follow you? You seem like and interesting person. :)
Well have a nice day and good luck on your next chapter!
-CameronEmma
9/18/2016 c12 CameronEmma
I swear your descriptions give me life. If you ever want to publish a book or something tell me because I will 100% pay for it.
That being said Loki is a little shit and Thor too. I wonder when Balder will start showing his other side too!
And just i want to know everything about the girls (and the gods for that matter)
Will the girls start being afraid of the gods bc they just started to really realize what they were?
Sorry for the bad review i am at work rn
Good luck with the next chapter!
-CameronEmma
I swear your descriptions give me life. If you ever want to publish a book or something tell me because I will 100% pay for it.
That being said Loki is a little shit and Thor too. I wonder when Balder will start showing his other side too!
And just i want to know everything about the girls (and the gods for that matter)
Will the girls start being afraid of the gods bc they just started to really realize what they were?
Sorry for the bad review i am at work rn
Good luck with the next chapter!
-CameronEmma
9/10/2016 c12 
1anaisonfire
Oh my god I love this fic!
It's too bad that Kamigami no Asobi isn't more popular. It's a really good anime with a lot of potential about fanfics, as you've demonstrated. I really like your OCs and can't wait to read about their pasts... It gives more personality to the characters and from what glimpses we have seen it will be a /fun/ revelation (note the sarcasm). I feel like it will be angst-y so the gods' reactions (especially the more cheerful ones, like Apollo and Balder) will be interesting. And also, are you planning something for Yui? I feel like she needs a bit more depth. In the anime it was always "gotta help this god" "oh no that god is having trouble, better help him" and I realize that that's how the majority of reverse-harem main characters are but a bit personality never hurt anybody. Then again, with the girls questioning "how do the gods see us" that you have going maybe it will come up? And you've already shown a side of her that we didn't see much in the anime (as far as I can remember) - that is, getting irritated with Loki's antics, especially in the first few chapters.
Anyhow, I'm rambling now so I'll stop. In short, thank you for writing this, it's amazing and I love it and also good luck with college (it's important! So don't worry if it takes a bit of time to update because of it!). 'Til next time :)
P.S. Your name's Ana? Me too! XDD
1anaisonfireOh my god I love this fic!
It's too bad that Kamigami no Asobi isn't more popular. It's a really good anime with a lot of potential about fanfics, as you've demonstrated. I really like your OCs and can't wait to read about their pasts... It gives more personality to the characters and from what glimpses we have seen it will be a /fun/ revelation (note the sarcasm). I feel like it will be angst-y so the gods' reactions (especially the more cheerful ones, like Apollo and Balder) will be interesting. And also, are you planning something for Yui? I feel like she needs a bit more depth. In the anime it was always "gotta help this god" "oh no that god is having trouble, better help him" and I realize that that's how the majority of reverse-harem main characters are but a bit personality never hurt anybody. Then again, with the girls questioning "how do the gods see us" that you have going maybe it will come up? And you've already shown a side of her that we didn't see much in the anime (as far as I can remember) - that is, getting irritated with Loki's antics, especially in the first few chapters.
Anyhow, I'm rambling now so I'll stop. In short, thank you for writing this, it's amazing and I love it and also good luck with college (it's important! So don't worry if it takes a bit of time to update because of it!). 'Til next time :)
P.S. Your name's Ana? Me too! XDD
8/21/2016 c11 CameronEmma
Your stories are so full of emotions that i have to read it in sections since i don't know how to deal with them!
The part where misuki nearly had her flashback made me stop for 2-3 days lol I thought that she had screamed at Apollo.
And yes I do think about shipping some of them but I don't know enough about the girls or the gods for that matter to have a clear idea about it.
As always I loved the chapter and good luck on the next one!
-CameronEmma
Your stories are so full of emotions that i have to read it in sections since i don't know how to deal with them!
The part where misuki nearly had her flashback made me stop for 2-3 days lol I thought that she had screamed at Apollo.
And yes I do think about shipping some of them but I don't know enough about the girls or the gods for that matter to have a clear idea about it.
As always I loved the chapter and good luck on the next one!
-CameronEmma
8/6/2016 c10 Guest
Aaaand i am so so so late in reviewing both chapters, i apologize!
Have i mentionned how in love i am with your dionysus? I am in awe a of your characterization like you wouldnt believe!
I can't wait until next chapter, good luck!
-cameronemma
Aaaand i am so so so late in reviewing both chapters, i apologize!
Have i mentionned how in love i am with your dionysus? I am in awe a of your characterization like you wouldnt believe!
I can't wait until next chapter, good luck!
-cameronemma
7/11/2016 c9 AndreaRamos2003
Pos pos poooooooooooooooosssssssss , ... QUE HORROR! NO SE QUE DECIR (escribir ... ? ... ... nah XD) mmmmmmmmmmmmm ... (Vamos Andrea... PIENSA! saca algun tema de conversasiooon! RAPIDO!) esteeeeeeeeeeeemmmmmmmm... YA! ... no... POR DEOOS! que digooooo? ... ahhhhh ya pos que mas decir? dire mis 3 dioses favoritoshhhhhh w 1. Oviamenteeee... LOKI fue, es y sera por siempre mi FA-VO-RI-TO! ( me encantan sus bromas y su original manera de ser, como les toma el pelo a todos! es taaaan genial! y ... tambiien su lado "serio" cuando se preocupa por Balder casi al final del anime y tambien su lado avergonzado ... cuando lo vi en el anime era comoooo... estaba todo sonrojado y con cara de "ohno, me descubriste OwO "... SIMPLEMENTE ME EN-CAN-TA... osahh! es otro level! 737 ok?! (?) (posdata: lo se! al inicio era testarudo ... pero no mucho ,, o almenos dejame creer eso ,, despues ya cambio y ... fue muy lindo ... de verdad! u/u )) 2. Tsukito... no se porque! pero aun asi me agrada, tal vez sea por que en el cap 6 del anime cuando lo vi sonreir por primera vez me quede como que : ... ... ... ... ... ... WTF! que es lo que acabo de sentir? ... seraaaaaaaaa ... CARIÑO?! OoO'' (su sonrisa por mas pequeña que sea, es ... -muy... - kawaii! :3 ! me gusta! y 3. ... ... ... Dionisus... es taaaaaaaaaan despreocupado XD como que : dormir en clase ... y beber demasiado creyendo que no le afectara ... sinceramente nos parecemos un poco (en lo de dormir cuando se debe prestar atencion! no en lo de beber! porfavor!) y eso! como se preocupa SOLO por su jugo hecho a mano! xD la verdad es que me ha sacado muchas sonrisas y por eso lo aprecio ... y ahi estan mis 3 dioses FAVORITOOOOOOOOOOOS! (lose lose mucha emocion ... ASI SOY YO PUES! xD ) y con eso finalize! (creo que escribi muy poco verdad? - notese el sarcazmo :P lol -) pos buehhh ... ahhhh! y de todas las chicas me agradan dos, MISAKI y REN ... (mas misaki que ren ... no se la razon pero asi soy yo xD) y con eso me despidoooooo BYE! (significa adios ... verdad? VERDAD?!) xD
Pos pos poooooooooooooooosssssssss , ... QUE HORROR! NO SE QUE DECIR (escribir ... ? ... ... nah XD) mmmmmmmmmmmmm ... (Vamos Andrea... PIENSA! saca algun tema de conversasiooon! RAPIDO!) esteeeeeeeeeeeemmmmmmmm... YA! ... no... POR DEOOS! que digooooo? ... ahhhhh ya pos que mas decir? dire mis 3 dioses favoritoshhhhhh w 1. Oviamenteeee... LOKI fue, es y sera por siempre mi FA-VO-RI-TO! ( me encantan sus bromas y su original manera de ser, como les toma el pelo a todos! es taaaan genial! y ... tambiien su lado "serio" cuando se preocupa por Balder casi al final del anime y tambien su lado avergonzado ... cuando lo vi en el anime era comoooo... estaba todo sonrojado y con cara de "ohno, me descubriste OwO "... SIMPLEMENTE ME EN-CAN-TA... osahh! es otro level! 737 ok?! (?) (posdata: lo se! al inicio era testarudo ... pero no mucho ,, o almenos dejame creer eso ,, despues ya cambio y ... fue muy lindo ... de verdad! u/u )) 2. Tsukito... no se porque! pero aun asi me agrada, tal vez sea por que en el cap 6 del anime cuando lo vi sonreir por primera vez me quede como que : ... ... ... ... ... ... WTF! que es lo que acabo de sentir? ... seraaaaaaaaa ... CARIÑO?! OoO'' (su sonrisa por mas pequeña que sea, es ... -muy... - kawaii! :3 ! me gusta! y 3. ... ... ... Dionisus... es taaaaaaaaaan despreocupado XD como que : dormir en clase ... y beber demasiado creyendo que no le afectara ... sinceramente nos parecemos un poco (en lo de dormir cuando se debe prestar atencion! no en lo de beber! porfavor!) y eso! como se preocupa SOLO por su jugo hecho a mano! xD la verdad es que me ha sacado muchas sonrisas y por eso lo aprecio ... y ahi estan mis 3 dioses FAVORITOOOOOOOOOOOS! (lose lose mucha emocion ... ASI SOY YO PUES! xD ) y con eso finalize! (creo que escribi muy poco verdad? - notese el sarcazmo :P lol -) pos buehhh ... ahhhh! y de todas las chicas me agradan dos, MISAKI y REN ... (mas misaki que ren ... no se la razon pero asi soy yo xD) y con eso me despidoooooo BYE! (significa adios ... verdad? VERDAD?!) xD
7/3/2016 c8 AndreaRamos2003
Pos buehhhh! Claro, esa Arisu se lo merecía ... sin ofender perooooo,como lo dijo Misaki : lo provocaste! pues pobrecito de mi Loki... soportar todo lo que le dijo Arisu... U.U no tengo nada en contra de Arisu, pero en este caso se paso un poquito no? ... igual... he muerto de risa cuando loki le dio ese pedazito de carne a Arisu, oseah era como que "paz" pero no! era la dulce (o salada ... (?)) VENGANZA mouahahahahahahaha ... ok ok me estoy pasando de mala ... pero es verdad! . igual ... me encanto el cap, siguela! xD (posdata... para Arisu : calmate OoO ... casi te comes a Loki con tus palabras 7o7 , ... controlate un poquito para la otra vale? ToT ... me agradas pero no al maltrato porfavor o xD) espero el siguiente cap!
Pos buehhhh! Claro, esa Arisu se lo merecía ... sin ofender perooooo,como lo dijo Misaki : lo provocaste! pues pobrecito de mi Loki... soportar todo lo que le dijo Arisu... U.U no tengo nada en contra de Arisu, pero en este caso se paso un poquito no? ... igual... he muerto de risa cuando loki le dio ese pedazito de carne a Arisu, oseah era como que "paz" pero no! era la dulce (o salada ... (?)) VENGANZA mouahahahahahahaha ... ok ok me estoy pasando de mala ... pero es verdad! . igual ... me encanto el cap, siguela! xD (posdata... para Arisu : calmate OoO ... casi te comes a Loki con tus palabras 7o7 , ... controlate un poquito para la otra vale? ToT ... me agradas pero no al maltrato porfavor o xD) espero el siguiente cap!
6/25/2016 c7 Guest
Sorry if it took so much time to review! I had had a bad week and then it slipped my mind lol
Thanks for the descriptions and cheering me up!
Good luck on your next chapter
-cameronemma
Sorry if it took so much time to review! I had had a bad week and then it slipped my mind lol
Thanks for the descriptions and cheering me up!
Good luck on your next chapter
-cameronemma
6/12/2016 c7 AndreaRamos2003
pero por supuesto que me gusto el cap! ... en especial la parte en la que misaki ayudaba a arisu a cruzar el puente! ... esa parte me partio de risa, es que era como que: RUN BITH RUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNN! jajajajajajajajajajaja xD
pero por supuesto que me gusto el cap! ... en especial la parte en la que misaki ayudaba a arisu a cruzar el puente! ... esa parte me partio de risa, es que era como que: RUN BITH RUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNN! jajajajajajajajajajaja xD
6/12/2016 c7 ANONymus
Are you going to put Anubis in this fic?
Are you going to put Anubis in this fic?
6/7/2016 c6 EDGAR
Interesting read. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Interesting read. Can't wait for the next chapter.
6/5/2016 c6 yioushievans
It was really intresting plz update
It was really intresting plz update
6/1/2016 c6 TheRadiatingHelen
Hey Ana (I hope, I don't offend you)
I really like how you Made this simple 'harem'-style Game/Anime/Manga into something deeper. The part with Leto and Apollo was awesome. I enjoy every lesson about Myths, I was really gripped with The Story. I hope you'll tell us a little of every Myth those gods have. (I really like the Story of Hades and Mint) Even thought, you said, you couldn't really describe those Sport Events, I didn't felt that while reading. As always your english is very chosen and beautiful. I really hope you will keep going and give us, your readers, a wonderful Story. Keep it real. -RH
Hey Ana (I hope, I don't offend you)
I really like how you Made this simple 'harem'-style Game/Anime/Manga into something deeper. The part with Leto and Apollo was awesome. I enjoy every lesson about Myths, I was really gripped with The Story. I hope you'll tell us a little of every Myth those gods have. (I really like the Story of Hades and Mint) Even thought, you said, you couldn't really describe those Sport Events, I didn't felt that while reading. As always your english is very chosen and beautiful. I really hope you will keep going and give us, your readers, a wonderful Story. Keep it real. -RH
5/31/2016 c6 AndreaRamos2003
ooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh ... que "gran" incentivo ah! (bien ahi (?)) xD es queee ... eso que pusiste sobre de pasar un dia con ellos y ya querer morir ... pues me trajo algunos recuerdos . *recordando* e.e es que es taaaaaan relacionado con la vida real que en verdad ... EN VERDAD es un gran incentivo xD y pues bueno al fin ... iran a clases no? por lo menos ya les honraran con su grata presencia ... ... y ya pues nada mas que decir ... muy bueno el cap actualiza pronto ;) (disculpa si sueno aburrida ... esque no se me ocurria nada mas para comentar y pos ... possss pos nah ya me he alargado mucho ... creo ... pero YA adiosh ... bye)
ooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh ... que "gran" incentivo ah! (bien ahi (?)) xD es queee ... eso que pusiste sobre de pasar un dia con ellos y ya querer morir ... pues me trajo algunos recuerdos . *recordando* e.e es que es taaaaaan relacionado con la vida real que en verdad ... EN VERDAD es un gran incentivo xD y pues bueno al fin ... iran a clases no? por lo menos ya les honraran con su grata presencia ... ... y ya pues nada mas que decir ... muy bueno el cap actualiza pronto ;) (disculpa si sueno aburrida ... esque no se me ocurria nada mas para comentar y pos ... possss pos nah ya me he alargado mucho ... creo ... pero YA adiosh ... bye)
5/30/2016 c5 AndreaRamos2003
OMG ... peleas como pareja 7u7 ... jajaja nahhh no te preocupes . yo tampoco se mucho ingles ... e.e y me vale! xD (?) aun asi ... trato de escribir en ingles (lo que se, por supuesto ... (no me buleen XC )) cada vez que puedo ... asi q te entiendo o
OMG ... peleas como pareja 7u7 ... jajaja nahhh no te preocupes . yo tampoco se mucho ingles ... e.e y me vale! xD (?) aun asi ... trato de escribir en ingles (lo que se, por supuesto ... (no me buleen XC )) cada vez que puedo ... asi q te entiendo o