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20Spiritstrike
REEEEE! WTF STRONGARM! WOW! I'm rolling all over the place, daaaaamn! That's really exciting! REEEEEE! TOO EXCITED! WANT MOOOOOOORE! 3
20SpiritstrikeREEEEE! WTF STRONGARM! WOW! I'm rolling all over the place, daaaaamn! That's really exciting! REEEEEE! TOO EXCITED! WANT MOOOOOOORE! 3
3/11/2020 c1 CopperPigeon23
I really love this story, I can only hope to be able to write as well as you someday, I know you haven't updated in a while but will you please update, there's so few fanfics of Strongarm and this is by far one of my favorites so please don't give up on the fanfiction.
I really love this story, I can only hope to be able to write as well as you someday, I know you haven't updated in a while but will you please update, there's so few fanfics of Strongarm and this is by far one of my favorites so please don't give up on the fanfiction.
10/29/2018 c14 7AquaJinx
man, I just love reading about your orca hunts XD And another Ahklut Predacon! Cool!
7AquaJinxman, I just love reading about your orca hunts XD And another Ahklut Predacon! Cool!
3/11/2018 c13 Spiritstrike
Awww sis this chapter was amazing. Thank you so much! I dunno how to describe how much I appreciate the time and effort you put into writing this chapter. I cannot thank you enough. I felt nothing but sadness for Sedna and going through the many stages of grieving is a very tough challenge. Chihan is right... she has to learn to let her mother and brother go...
Awww sis this chapter was amazing. Thank you so much! I dunno how to describe how much I appreciate the time and effort you put into writing this chapter. I cannot thank you enough. I felt nothing but sadness for Sedna and going through the many stages of grieving is a very tough challenge. Chihan is right... she has to learn to let her mother and brother go...
3/10/2018 c13 7AquaJinx
Wow, what a fascinating look into the past! I really enjoyed this, as usual. :D
7AquaJinxWow, what a fascinating look into the past! I really enjoyed this, as usual. :D
10/13/2017 c12 20Spiritstrike
AHHHHHH! I feel so bad for poor Strongarm, but I know she will recover, she just needs some time to get better. Get well soon Strongarm.
And... AHHH! I know who Hvalfonka speaks of, aaaaaahhhh! I'm so excited! SO EXCITED! *starts to sing* "I'm so excited, baby I just can't hide it!" *wiggles excitedly*
20SpiritstrikeAHHHHHH! I feel so bad for poor Strongarm, but I know she will recover, she just needs some time to get better. Get well soon Strongarm.
And... AHHH! I know who Hvalfonka speaks of, aaaaaahhhh! I'm so excited! SO EXCITED! *starts to sing* "I'm so excited, baby I just can't hide it!" *wiggles excitedly*
7/16/2017 c11 Shadescribe
Oh dear... that would be very terrifying to witness, even more so experience. I guess Strongarm had to learn the hard way that anything can have a scary side, even orcas. I don't doubt that she will recover from her trauma, but it's a matter of 'when'. Hopefully, she does so sooner than later, she and Sedna have a beautiful friendship.
Oh dear... that would be very terrifying to witness, even more so experience. I guess Strongarm had to learn the hard way that anything can have a scary side, even orcas. I don't doubt that she will recover from her trauma, but it's a matter of 'when'. Hopefully, she does so sooner than later, she and Sedna have a beautiful friendship.
7/15/2017 c11 Spiritstrike
Oh no! Poor Strongarm! Big Jake did a real number on her psyche, I hope it doesn't damage her friendship with Sedna, poor, poor Strongarm. At least Sedna is okay, but I fear the worst. Seriously good job on this chapter, sorry for the delayed review. My bad! The humpbacks coming to the rescue put a HUGE smile on my face! Humpbacks for the win!
Oh no! Poor Strongarm! Big Jake did a real number on her psyche, I hope it doesn't damage her friendship with Sedna, poor, poor Strongarm. At least Sedna is okay, but I fear the worst. Seriously good job on this chapter, sorry for the delayed review. My bad! The humpbacks coming to the rescue put a HUGE smile on my face! Humpbacks for the win!
4/26/2017 c10 Spiritstrike
At least we're learning more and more about Sedna every chapter. Truly she is a fascinating creature. The more I learn about her, the more interesting the story gets. But those four orcas... they seem to spell big trouble... I have a bad feeling about this...
More sis! I need more!
At least we're learning more and more about Sedna every chapter. Truly she is a fascinating creature. The more I learn about her, the more interesting the story gets. But those four orcas... they seem to spell big trouble... I have a bad feeling about this...
More sis! I need more!
3/1/2017 c9 Spiritstrike
Oooo wow sis, I really like this chapter. I'm glad Optimus managed to find Strongarm, now he and her can make it their mission to study Sedna as much as they can.
I really liked how you described the ice age, it gave the images clearly in my head. 55,000 years of orca history, wow. I had no idea there were orcas this long ago. Man, this was so good and I'm glad I got to learn how the Laq Bloodline found Sedna. Also her orca name is really pretty, though... I wonder what it means. Surely each named clan member's name holds a special meaning.
This chapter was definitely worth it. It was a long time, but it was definitely worth reading. Thanks for updating! Can't wait for more!
Oooo wow sis, I really like this chapter. I'm glad Optimus managed to find Strongarm, now he and her can make it their mission to study Sedna as much as they can.
I really liked how you described the ice age, it gave the images clearly in my head. 55,000 years of orca history, wow. I had no idea there were orcas this long ago. Man, this was so good and I'm glad I got to learn how the Laq Bloodline found Sedna. Also her orca name is really pretty, though... I wonder what it means. Surely each named clan member's name holds a special meaning.
This chapter was definitely worth it. It was a long time, but it was definitely worth reading. Thanks for updating! Can't wait for more!
2/22/2017 c9 Shadescribe
Welcome back! And yeah, life tends to be unpredictable, especially in regards to education.
Anyway, it's nice to see that Optimus has found Strongarm and Sedna, and I can understand why Strongarm is not happy at the mere idea of Bumblebee's team finding her again.
Also, you certainly put a lot of effort into Sedna's background, even if it is just the first of her flashbacks.
Looking forward to the next update- whenever it may be and however long it may take!
Welcome back! And yeah, life tends to be unpredictable, especially in regards to education.
Anyway, it's nice to see that Optimus has found Strongarm and Sedna, and I can understand why Strongarm is not happy at the mere idea of Bumblebee's team finding her again.
Also, you certainly put a lot of effort into Sedna's background, even if it is just the first of her flashbacks.
Looking forward to the next update- whenever it may be and however long it may take!
1/6/2017 c8 Spiritstrike
*suddenly spins around with dizziness* I did it! I finally did it! My that was a very long chapter but it was so worth it. Sedna and Strongarm are really starting to understand each other day by day, night by night. I love how you're world-building the culture of the underwater world with the whales, orcas, and dolphins. It's really interesting and fascinating.
The shout outs to Free Willy made me smile because the bonding moment between Jessie and Willy was a very special moment, the bond between a boy and his orca that would live on in our hearts and minds for a long time. Got a little bit nervous when Sedna and Strongarm fought, but I guess its because of the frustation of not being able to understand and the impatience of healing. Poor things
I hope Optimus finds them soon.
Good job, sis. You did a very good job with this chapter. Well done!
*suddenly spins around with dizziness* I did it! I finally did it! My that was a very long chapter but it was so worth it. Sedna and Strongarm are really starting to understand each other day by day, night by night. I love how you're world-building the culture of the underwater world with the whales, orcas, and dolphins. It's really interesting and fascinating.
The shout outs to Free Willy made me smile because the bonding moment between Jessie and Willy was a very special moment, the bond between a boy and his orca that would live on in our hearts and minds for a long time. Got a little bit nervous when Sedna and Strongarm fought, but I guess its because of the frustation of not being able to understand and the impatience of healing. Poor things
I hope Optimus finds them soon.
Good job, sis. You did a very good job with this chapter. Well done!
12/28/2016 c8 Shadescribe
Ya know, instead of saying "Yester-sun circle", you could simplify it to "Pre-sun circle".
But anyway, nice to finally be hearing from ya, and I look forward to any future updates on the story!
Happy New Year!
Ya know, instead of saying "Yester-sun circle", you could simplify it to "Pre-sun circle".
But anyway, nice to finally be hearing from ya, and I look forward to any future updates on the story!
Happy New Year!