for Sedna: The Akhlut From The Depth9/6/2016 c7 
20Spiritstrike
WHOO! Sedna and Strongarm are well underway of becoming very good friends! This is totally awesome! I love it! Once again, loved the shout outs to HTTYD, you're very clever at blending the two together. Very impressive. I love learning about Sedna's biology, and now that I understand she's sensitive to loud noises, it explains why she ripped off Windblade's wings... poor thing.
I hope Optimus finds them and sees that Sedna is not at all a monster. Hopefully soon.
20SpiritstrikeWHOO! Sedna and Strongarm are well underway of becoming very good friends! This is totally awesome! I love it! Once again, loved the shout outs to HTTYD, you're very clever at blending the two together. Very impressive. I love learning about Sedna's biology, and now that I understand she's sensitive to loud noises, it explains why she ripped off Windblade's wings... poor thing.
I hope Optimus finds them and sees that Sedna is not at all a monster. Hopefully soon.
9/2/2016 c7 Oxidous
how to train your dragon comes to is one of the best Transformers: Robots In Disguise 2015/2016 fanfics i've seen work! _
how to train your dragon comes to is one of the best Transformers: Robots In Disguise 2015/2016 fanfics i've seen work! _
9/1/2016 c7 Shadescribe
I've been reading this fanfiction for some time now, and LOVING it.
Oh yeah, and the Strongarm's less than eager consumption of the regurgitated fish and the scene of the "trust touch" with Sedna are both references to the first "How to Train Your Dragon" movie.
Anyway, looking forward to your next update!
I've been reading this fanfiction for some time now, and LOVING it.
Oh yeah, and the Strongarm's less than eager consumption of the regurgitated fish and the scene of the "trust touch" with Sedna are both references to the first "How to Train Your Dragon" movie.
Anyway, looking forward to your next update!
7/5/2016 c6 20Spiritstrike
Lots and lots of HTTYD references there! Hahaha! I really enjoyed it sis. Makes me love this story even more! I hope this story keeps going on for a long time, its so much fun and I can understand Sedna's frustrations at not being able to understand what Strongarm is trying to say. Yee gods! Keep it up!
20SpiritstrikeLots and lots of HTTYD references there! Hahaha! I really enjoyed it sis. Makes me love this story even more! I hope this story keeps going on for a long time, its so much fun and I can understand Sedna's frustrations at not being able to understand what Strongarm is trying to say. Yee gods! Keep it up!
7/4/2016 c6 7AquaJinx
Hmmm, the movies seem to be mixed with Free Willy and, definitely, How To Train Your Dragon.
:D
7AquaJinxHmmm, the movies seem to be mixed with Free Willy and, definitely, How To Train Your Dragon.
:D
5/20/2016 c5 guest
Hmmm... I don't see how a giant orca brutually killing dolphins would scare off tourists enough to have impacts. There are quite a few tourist that enjoy a good kill as morbid as that sounds. In the wild even in death there is somehow beauty, magnificance, and life in those final moments.
Hmmm... I don't see how a giant orca brutually killing dolphins would scare off tourists enough to have impacts. There are quite a few tourist that enjoy a good kill as morbid as that sounds. In the wild even in death there is somehow beauty, magnificance, and life in those final moments.
5/19/2016 c5 ss
I like this will prime be able to talk to sedan to
I like this will prime be able to talk to sedan to
5/19/2016 c5 20Spiritstrike
Yay! Strongarm found Sedna! I hope Strongarm can help her get better. But what's this mention of Big Jake? He sounds really scary and not someone to mess with. I'm going to assume he's an antagonist of the story.
Goddamnit, Bee. What the frick did you do this time? Two men short?! I got a little confused with their conversation as they argued, but it slowly came to me as it went on. I've got a slight headache atm, so some of the words aren't really processing through. I hope Optimus finds Strongarm soon.
20SpiritstrikeYay! Strongarm found Sedna! I hope Strongarm can help her get better. But what's this mention of Big Jake? He sounds really scary and not someone to mess with. I'm going to assume he's an antagonist of the story.
Goddamnit, Bee. What the frick did you do this time? Two men short?! I got a little confused with their conversation as they argued, but it slowly came to me as it went on. I've got a slight headache atm, so some of the words aren't really processing through. I hope Optimus finds Strongarm soon.
4/15/2016 c3 Reader
It's a pretty interesting story, Sedna is quite a unique character that I am interested in seeing more of. One criticism I have though, is that the conflict in chapter 4 felt a little forced. Aside from that, I can't wait to see what will happen next.
It's a pretty interesting story, Sedna is quite a unique character that I am interested in seeing more of. One criticism I have though, is that the conflict in chapter 4 felt a little forced. Aside from that, I can't wait to see what will happen next.
4/3/2016 c4 Spiritstrike
Oh dear, poor Strongarm. She needs some hugs right now to make her go back. Optimus should've stepped in when he had the chance, but no he went off the sidelines and watched. Goddamnit Optimus, you blew it big time!
Oh dear, poor Strongarm. She needs some hugs right now to make her go back. Optimus should've stepped in when he had the chance, but no he went off the sidelines and watched. Goddamnit Optimus, you blew it big time!
3/30/2016 c3 Spiritstrike
Well learning about Sedna's anatomy was certainly interesting, but the fact that she reacted so violently by ripping off Windblade's wings? DAMN! Never thought that she'd save Strongarm in the face of a crisis, but I can only imagine that Sedna saving her life was only just the start.
Can't wait for more! WANT MORE DAMNIT! XD
Well learning about Sedna's anatomy was certainly interesting, but the fact that she reacted so violently by ripping off Windblade's wings? DAMN! Never thought that she'd save Strongarm in the face of a crisis, but I can only imagine that Sedna saving her life was only just the start.
Can't wait for more! WANT MORE DAMNIT! XD
3/19/2016 c2 Spiritstrike
Intense! Poor, poor Sedna... I wanna hug her so much. Precious... so much love, those awful whalers... bastards!
Intense! Poor, poor Sedna... I wanna hug her so much. Precious... so much love, those awful whalers... bastards!