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7/19 c5 Roland
THAT'S THAT AND THIS IS THIS?
내게는 고통밖에 없습니다.
그것 말고는 아무것도 바라지 않습니다.
고통은 내게 충실했고, 지금도 변함이 없습니다.
내 영혼이 심연의 바닥을 헤멜 때에도.
고통은 늘 곁에 앉아 나를 지켜주었으니
어떻게 고통을 원망하겠습니까.
아 고통이여, 너는 결코 내게서 떠나지 않겠기에 나는 마침내 너를 존경하기에 이르렀다.
나는 이제 너를 알겠다. 너는 존재하는 것만으로도 아름답다는 것을.
너는 가난한 내 마음의 화롯가를 결코 떠나지 않았던 사람을 닮았다.
나의 고통이여, 너는 더없이 사랑하는 여인보다 다정하다.
나는 알고 있나니 내가 죽음의 자리에 드는 날에도
너는 내 마음속으로 깊이 들어와
나와 함께 가지런히 누우리라.
7/18 c16 SMB
That's three ways you've nerfed him to die at unexpected moments. F**king pathetic. Losing spirit power he never had before could kill him now? F**k you. I kept reading and hoping you'd fix things and you added that stupid shit instead. Dropping this garbage.
7/18 c5 yrlastin
Magic and Aura should be separate after all Magic is a thing in this world(Maidens and Salem).
7/17 c2 SMB
Why didn't he try one of the old cookbooks first? Going all the way across the f**king city just to see if he can use a skill book he f**king knows he can't absorb with such small stats is f**king stupid.
I f**king hate it when supposedly smart people act so f**king dumb.
He has f**king AMNESIA and his loving sister is going to let the f**king moRon leave the house for f**king hours COMPLETELY UNSUPERVISED and he only has to return at night. It's f**king stupid!
4/4 c33 Guest
Five years later with no update. Not even an author’s note telling us it is discontinued. Lame.
3/17 c1 4HaziX WeeK
the "oni-chane" got me laughing so hard and then immediately became cringe, i would continue reading but i have a lot of stuff im reading at the moment.
coll idea though
3/17 c1 St. Fyrecat
I see that this has not been updated since 2018. Does that mean that you have completely abandoned it? If so, that makes me sad. I really enjoyed the story so far, and keep checking checking back to see see if it has been updated.
If you can convince your muse to return to this story, it would be much appreciated!
3/2 c8 Efail1
This story kinda feels like artificial drama? There's nothing that actually matters in the long run besides a deadline for joining beacon and even then he's kinda going at it in a really weird way. The dialogue also feels off most of the time like he's constantly confused and whiny about his system... really he's kinda just whiny in general. Complaining about parts of the system and then jumping right into it. A lot of the conversations also feel like a beginner dnd player, they react and make jokes but the people around them kinda just don't react right to just how weird the mc is so everything feels off. He kinda feels like he's got low-level Aspergers or on some level of the spectrum. There's sm*t though so most people probably don't care.
12/28/2023 c33 Vorthod
The series has a couple moments that are a bit unnecessarily heavy-handed referencing real-world politics, but all-in-all I did enjoy the series quite a bit. It's a shame it got dropped. Doubly so since it happened basically right before the moment where the cover image actually becomes relevant. Regardless, thank you very much for the fun story.
12/21/2023 c16 VamPyr00
Seems to me that the MC has become a whipped doormat. He basically gets NOTHING out of the relationship with those girls other than sex, which he could get anywhere (don't even bring up companionship, since he has a HUGE family now that he could spend time with). The girls gain (read: demand) money, status, housing, free food, power, unique abilities, HIS SECRETS, AND generally get treated like royalty; while all they give him is sex.

They haven't even trusted him with their BACKGROUNDS and yet they demand him to tell them everything about himself AND his powers, plus basically do everything for them. He can't even go on a casual date without asking for PERMISSION because they have 'Veto Rights' and could get mad and simply betray or leave him; meaning HIS opinions don't even matter! The sad thing is that he goes along with it! He tells them all his secrets, powers, plans, and EVERYTHING while he gets NOTHING in return. Honestly, it is just pathetic.

The only one that brings true benefits to the table is Joan, since she can take care of herself AND help him. All the other girls are basically useless liabilities. Miltia is better than the others (since she basically became his personal secretary/information broker) but is still a liability due to her weakness. He could EASILY gather that information on his own with a simple use of his powers, making anything they could tell him irrelevant.

It may sound harsh, but they ARE weak links and can be easily used against him by his future enemies (Case in point: Emerald was able to follow Neo to HIS home to kill him). Not only that, but they are cutting into his own personal growth and research time for useless shit like 'romance' (individual dates that span entire days is fucking ridiculous with how little free time he has, yet they demand it).

He has also put too much trust into them at this point and has no real way of ensuring their loyalty without infringing on his extremely inconsistent morals (one second he is uncaring and cold, next second he is a fucking bleeding heart). If they ever betray him or simply find someone they like better (since they seem really shallow/easy), they will know all his secrets and powers and even be able to use the powers that HE granted them against him.

I really like the story development, game elements, action, and world building in this story so far. Unfortunately, the relationship and character development has taken a nosedive since he left home. As I stated above, the only one that is even useful to him is Joan and she would also be the least likely to ever betray him. All the other girls seem shallow and too easy to really trust (all of them 'joined' after a single night with him). All this trouble they pose while giving him no benefits he couldn't get for himself AND imposing ridiculous restrictions on him (like 'Veto Rights' and demanding he 'romance' them to keep THEM happy, disregarding HIS feelings).

Now that the story has devolved into the cliche 'MC gives all his girls the same power he has', I doubt I'll be sticking around for long. It is an amazing, well-written story but the relationship/harem development completely ruined it for me. I don't mind the setup but even harems are supposed to be 'give and take', just like ALL relationships. The fact that the MC is the only one 'giving' in this scenario while the girls give NOTHING just leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
12/21/2023 c15 VamPyr00
Oh God, please, PLEASE don't go the clone route. It NEVER turns out good. At best, the girls stuck with clones seem neglected. At worst, it's like some weird self-NTR type thing. It just isn't worth it, no matter how often it's used.
12/21/2023 c13 VamPyr00
Lol, that's definitely his sister. If she DOESN'T already know who he is, then that will be awkward as hell later! XD
12/20/2023 c8 VamPyr00
So, random question, why hasn't he created any resistance skills yet? I remember he got that Physical Resistance/Endurance (whatever it was) skill from getting beat up by his little sister but he hasn't created ANY elemental, magic, dust, or aura resistance skills yet. Seems like a pretty obvious thing to create if he is dealing with an elemental Semblance or grimm.
12/20/2023 c5 VamPyr00
Ugh, seems like the MC is a pathetic coward...
12/19/2023 c2 VamPyr00
Seems like he completely forgot about his pigstye of a room. XD
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