for The Name of the Game6/22/2021 c33 Guest
Come back to me bby
Come back to me bby
6/19/2021 c6 Guest
Worry not jaune magic plus aura can heal anything brooo
Incest born children cant beat a magic heal
Worry not jaune magic plus aura can heal anything brooo
Incest born children cant beat a magic heal
6/5/2021 c6 Guest
From what I've read so far this has been much better than than other gamer fics I've read but Im just not feeling it with him having an eventual harem and sharing the gamer stuff but still leagues better than most fics I look for.
From what I've read so far this has been much better than than other gamer fics I've read but Im just not feeling it with him having an eventual harem and sharing the gamer stuff but still leagues better than most fics I look for.
6/2/2021 c1 Guest
Autistic ass story
Autistic ass story
5/19/2021 c15 
18Luciendar
Great story. The only depiction of Jaune over even come close to enjoying. This story just wasn't for me. It wasn't what I was looking for, ya know? Too much sex, not enough action. Plus, I wanted more infection with the main cast, especially my fave girl Pyrrha.
Other than that, my only real issue was the reality behind the story. He'd never know if any of the girls truly loved him or it was just his ability. Even Joan didn't truly know him and lived her brother. I doubt she'd have handled the truth well. The other girls were all drawn by his power. It's lungs funny that Cinder was the only person to figure it out and control herself.
Psychologically it all sounds like he's this really sad and lonely guy.
I'll applaud your world building though. You did a phenomenal job of explaining shit. It just didn't do it for me.
18LuciendarGreat story. The only depiction of Jaune over even come close to enjoying. This story just wasn't for me. It wasn't what I was looking for, ya know? Too much sex, not enough action. Plus, I wanted more infection with the main cast, especially my fave girl Pyrrha.
Other than that, my only real issue was the reality behind the story. He'd never know if any of the girls truly loved him or it was just his ability. Even Joan didn't truly know him and lived her brother. I doubt she'd have handled the truth well. The other girls were all drawn by his power. It's lungs funny that Cinder was the only person to figure it out and control herself.
Psychologically it all sounds like he's this really sad and lonely guy.
I'll applaud your world building though. You did a phenomenal job of explaining shit. It just didn't do it for me.
4/29/2021 c1 PSYCONIG
Yeah tell everybody that you have powers that makes you a traget, real pro move, why not writing it on your forehead.
Yeah tell everybody that you have powers that makes you a traget, real pro move, why not writing it on your forehead.
4/29/2021 c33 LordFluffyPuffy
This has been a long three days of reading the story. An absolute wonderful journey. I've massively enjoyed the story, the characterization and of course the smut haha. There's a few instances where I felt the info dumps were a bit too many but quite like that the chapter wasn't a narration of a gaming character but an actual story with gaming elements.
Keep up the good stuff!
This has been a long three days of reading the story. An absolute wonderful journey. I've massively enjoyed the story, the characterization and of course the smut haha. There's a few instances where I felt the info dumps were a bit too many but quite like that the chapter wasn't a narration of a gaming character but an actual story with gaming elements.
Keep up the good stuff!
4/28/2021 c27 TheB3st201
I didn't like this chapter for one simple thing Nothing changed form cannon like Jaune's interference here doesn't make any difference with Cinder still getting half of Maiden powers it played exactly like cannon with just Jaune in it
I didn't like this chapter for one simple thing Nothing changed form cannon like Jaune's interference here doesn't make any difference with Cinder still getting half of Maiden powers it played exactly like cannon with just Jaune in it
4/24/2021 c5 Daisy
Sigh.. it's a decent looking fic but the MC is just a special type of retard.
He even has metaknowledge and still dares to show magic off and go to beacon.
Sigh.. it's a decent looking fic but the MC is just a special type of retard.
He even has metaknowledge and still dares to show magic off and go to beacon.
4/23/2021 c33 IcySneasel
i found this story this week and it's all I've read the past week. it's an awesome world building fic that's sadly been left behind. I hope you come back and continue it because 33 chapters 700k words and we finally just get to season 1 i so want more posted.
i found this story this week and it's all I've read the past week. it's an awesome world building fic that's sadly been left behind. I hope you come back and continue it because 33 chapters 700k words and we finally just get to season 1 i so want more posted.
4/17/2021 c22 BlackStarMage
I find this explanation for Faunus being a threat 'biologically speaking' bullshit. Faunus can interbreed with humans, it was confirmed in a livestream with the creators of the show. Meaning 'biologically speaking' Faunus and Humans might as well be the same species. You don't see dogs being able to fornicate with birds do you? Yes, Faunus existing take up more resources, but its the same amount of resources that an equal amount of humans existing would take up. the only difference appearance wise are the animal ears/tails/whatever other minor animal add on is added. Honestly, Faunus are no more threats to humans 'biologically speaking' then Black people are to White. The only thing you had a point with was the instincts, and for one, it seems to me like so far, you've only added instincts that increase the horniness of woman, to add to Jaunes harem. You even said that Faunus are perfectly capable of controlling their instincts, so really that's not a valid point either. The only thing stopping Faunus and humans from living together peacefully (like some already do) is the race wars. Which, ironically enough, stems from the same thing that would have made your 'biologically speaking, your a threat' schtick moot anyway. Our sapience, our ability to look at ourselves and the world around us and think logically. Even if every single one of your points above was true (which there not) then our sapience would make them invalid, we can think, and deny our instincts. Though it is for the sapience that the racism exists in the first place sooo... yeah. That sucks. You do mention that sapience makes all of it moot anyway, but it seemed like Jaune didn't really believe that, it seemed to me like he believed that in this instance, 'biologically speaking' the body has full control.
Anyway, sorry for the rant, that just really irritated me. Way to xenophobic for my tastes. Other then that it was an O.K. Chapter.
I find this explanation for Faunus being a threat 'biologically speaking' bullshit. Faunus can interbreed with humans, it was confirmed in a livestream with the creators of the show. Meaning 'biologically speaking' Faunus and Humans might as well be the same species. You don't see dogs being able to fornicate with birds do you? Yes, Faunus existing take up more resources, but its the same amount of resources that an equal amount of humans existing would take up. the only difference appearance wise are the animal ears/tails/whatever other minor animal add on is added. Honestly, Faunus are no more threats to humans 'biologically speaking' then Black people are to White. The only thing you had a point with was the instincts, and for one, it seems to me like so far, you've only added instincts that increase the horniness of woman, to add to Jaunes harem. You even said that Faunus are perfectly capable of controlling their instincts, so really that's not a valid point either. The only thing stopping Faunus and humans from living together peacefully (like some already do) is the race wars. Which, ironically enough, stems from the same thing that would have made your 'biologically speaking, your a threat' schtick moot anyway. Our sapience, our ability to look at ourselves and the world around us and think logically. Even if every single one of your points above was true (which there not) then our sapience would make them invalid, we can think, and deny our instincts. Though it is for the sapience that the racism exists in the first place sooo... yeah. That sucks. You do mention that sapience makes all of it moot anyway, but it seemed like Jaune didn't really believe that, it seemed to me like he believed that in this instance, 'biologically speaking' the body has full control.
Anyway, sorry for the rant, that just really irritated me. Way to xenophobic for my tastes. Other then that it was an O.K. Chapter.