for The Name of the Game3/2/2021 c10 KaySchus
Having to out up with the ranting of an arrogant man who hates the world and everything in it is such a massive downside to this story. in h the MC's mind everything is obviously the fault of women and nu-males (whatever the he'll that even means).
Having to out up with the ranting of an arrogant man who hates the world and everything in it is such a massive downside to this story. in h the MC's mind everything is obviously the fault of women and nu-males (whatever the he'll that even means).
2/24/2021 c33 Guest
Finish it finish it finish it
Finish it finish it finish it
1/30/2021 c33 Guest
I really look forward to when your employment situation settles down and you can get back to writing. This story is excellent and I’d hate to see it abandoned.
I really look forward to when your employment situation settles down and you can get back to writing. This story is excellent and I’d hate to see it abandoned.
21/13/2021 c32 Llamas6
I was so waiting for him to leave them with a cryptic line like "CINDER'S FALL burns AMBER AUTUMN leaves." That would have been peak chadhodd.
I was so waiting for him to leave them with a cryptic line like "CINDER'S FALL burns AMBER AUTUMN leaves." That would have been peak chadhodd.
1/9/2021 c19 Face Yourself
Well that's just plain offensive and stupid. A sapient AI like Penny is a person, exactly as much as any human or faunus, not a piece of gear. The story was tolerable before despite all the annoying wastes of time that were the lewd scenes and boring easy-mode that dominate and forget and such made it, but this blatantly *wrong* choice on the author's part to misrepresent the difference between person and equipment makes it just... worthless to continue.
Well that's just plain offensive and stupid. A sapient AI like Penny is a person, exactly as much as any human or faunus, not a piece of gear. The story was tolerable before despite all the annoying wastes of time that were the lewd scenes and boring easy-mode that dominate and forget and such made it, but this blatantly *wrong* choice on the author's part to misrepresent the difference between person and equipment makes it just... worthless to continue.
1/8/2021 c3 Face Yourself
Hrm. Here's hoping normal, non-Gamer-created Grimm don't have drops, or things will be awkward. Also that they don't have any MP, since they explicitly don't have souls or aura, and MP seems to be the analogue here rather than a separate thing.
Hrm. Here's hoping normal, non-Gamer-created Grimm don't have drops, or things will be awkward. Also that they don't have any MP, since they explicitly don't have souls or aura, and MP seems to be the analogue here rather than a separate thing.