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3/7/2016 c1 11Zeladious
So, uhm. Nice...one-shot or story...? Can't really tell by using my phone to view this.

The thing that only annoyed me was uh...there was no pause-like moments? It's, uhm, how do I say this...it was all-straight up reading/talking thing.

And this minor thing that gets me irritated was having respective words their letter capitalized accordingly, but this is just my thinking-thing. You don't have to take note of that.

Overall, it's a nice-average, I'll give it.
3/6/2016 c1 3suppes1
pretty good story

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