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I enjoyed it. Keep on writing.
I enjoyed it. Keep on writing.
3/13/2016 c2 Guest
Cute chapter! I love your point of you...it's lovely.
Cute chapter! I love your point of you...it's lovely.
3/13/2016 c1 luckyduck22
Good start, but I would suggest correcting some of the grammar and spelling. It would make your story overall look much neater. Specifically capitalization (capitalize all of the character names, beginning of sentences, stuff like that.)
Good start, but I would suggest correcting some of the grammar and spelling. It would make your story overall look much neater. Specifically capitalization (capitalize all of the character names, beginning of sentences, stuff like that.)
3/9/2016 c1 Guest
I Like this, hope you update soon.
I Like this, hope you update soon.
3/6/2016 c1 Klay
Actually it was good and cute. You should continue. Please. Please.
Actually it was good and cute. You should continue. Please. Please.
3/6/2016 c1 XXxxKlayleyLoverxxXX
EU TAMBÉM FALO PORTUGUÊS! Mas vc fala português de Portugal ou do Brasil?
Ótima história pelo caminho, apenas não costura a relação deles amorosa rápido demais,façam eles passarem por fases até chegar lá!
Great chapter!
EU TAMBÉM FALO PORTUGUÊS! Mas vc fala português de Portugal ou do Brasil?
Ótima história pelo caminho, apenas não costura a relação deles amorosa rápido demais,façam eles passarem por fases até chegar lá!
Great chapter!
3/6/2016 c1 
25225Starburst
This was a very sweet start. They are broken because they both lost loved ones but they heal through each other and soon find true love in each other. I really really hope that's where the writers are taking this on the show too. Update soon!
25225StarburstThis was a very sweet start. They are broken because they both lost loved ones but they heal through each other and soon find true love in each other. I really really hope that's where the writers are taking this on the show too. Update soon!