for fall asleep, fall apart11/10/2016 c1 
84wisegirlgeek
Eeek! Perfection! I love how you put a canon spin on this even though Rick never showed any of this happening. It's a really good reflection of PTSD. Great one!
84wisegirlgeekEeek! Perfection! I love how you put a canon spin on this even though Rick never showed any of this happening. It's a really good reflection of PTSD. Great one!
3/19/2016 c1 8cold clouds
Incredible. This gave me such a brilliant, fresh perspective on the lives of half-bloods. Your writing is amazing, and you've captured the essence of demigods so well. They're only children. They feel like pawns, like puppets, and they fight because they want to believe it's worth it. But how many kids can be killed before that changes?
~cold clouds~
8cold cloudsIncredible. This gave me such a brilliant, fresh perspective on the lives of half-bloods. Your writing is amazing, and you've captured the essence of demigods so well. They're only children. They feel like pawns, like puppets, and they fight because they want to believe it's worth it. But how many kids can be killed before that changes?
~cold clouds~