
8/26/2020 c13 Guest
aw so cute
aw so cute
5/15/2020 c13 Guest
I hope you write more of these they are so cute!
I hope you write more of these they are so cute!
4/30/2020 c13
28MistyMountainHop
Ah, they're flirting. *lol*
Jackie can translate Hyde's, "It's cool," and I think Hyde knows it.
Another lovely little snippet of that summer. :D

Ah, they're flirting. *lol*
Jackie can translate Hyde's, "It's cool," and I think Hyde knows it.
Another lovely little snippet of that summer. :D
11/3/2019 c13 Rachel
I love this story, and the way you tell it.
I love this story, and the way you tell it.
11/26/2018 c12 MistyMountainHop
On the show, Jackie wasn't a fan of Canada (likely because of snobby prejudices her parents rattled off). But in this drabble, she sees the country with fresh eyes, influenced by enjoying her time with Hyde. Very sweet.
On the show, Jackie wasn't a fan of Canada (likely because of snobby prejudices her parents rattled off). But in this drabble, she sees the country with fresh eyes, influenced by enjoying her time with Hyde. Very sweet.
11/5/2018 c11 107derwent
I love this story so much! It's been so long since i checked it out the last time. Hope you keep going, you're doing an amazing job here!
I love this story so much! It's been so long since i checked it out the last time. Hope you keep going, you're doing an amazing job here!
11/1/2018 c11 killyem
I thought this fic was abandoned. I’m glad it isn’t!
What an adorable drabble! So cute that Hyde had such lovely realization.
I can’t wait for more. Hope you’ll update soon.
I thought this fic was abandoned. I’m glad it isn’t!
What an adorable drabble! So cute that Hyde had such lovely realization.
I can’t wait for more. Hope you’ll update soon.
11/3/2017 c10
28MistyMountainHop
This is such a lovely, intimate, and playful moment between Jackie and Hyde. You give us enough specific details to create a concrete setting and develop character. This particular scene also hints at a potentially engaging and full story, one that takes place before and after this scene. I can imagine it easily.

This is such a lovely, intimate, and playful moment between Jackie and Hyde. You give us enough specific details to create a concrete setting and develop character. This particular scene also hints at a potentially engaging and full story, one that takes place before and after this scene. I can imagine it easily.
11/3/2017 c9 MistyMountainHop
I love how much characterization you fit into 100 words and the emotional tone of this particular entry.
Mrs. Forman as a terrible actress - reminds me of when she pretended to be on the phone with W.B., and Hyde called her on it.
I like that Hyde questions his own behavior. He's demonstrating self-awareness here, even though he's not fully connected to his feelings for Jackie (yet).
I love how much characterization you fit into 100 words and the emotional tone of this particular entry.
Mrs. Forman as a terrible actress - reminds me of when she pretended to be on the phone with W.B., and Hyde called her on it.
I like that Hyde questions his own behavior. He's demonstrating self-awareness here, even though he's not fully connected to his feelings for Jackie (yet).
10/30/2017 c9 Goldenbassets
These are so fun! I am now following and can't wait to see what else you have in store for us. The emotion and thought you provoke in 100 words is awe-inspiring
These are so fun! I am now following and can't wait to see what else you have in store for us. The emotion and thought you provoke in 100 words is awe-inspiring
10/22/2017 c8 MistyMountainHop
Wow, Jackie got to the Formans' early! *lol* She probably has a few hours to wait until Hyde wakes up, though.
Kitty definitely should be suspicious if not outright thinking J/H are together somehow - "I'm waiting for Steven."
Wow, Jackie got to the Formans' early! *lol* She probably has a few hours to wait until Hyde wakes up, though.
Kitty definitely should be suspicious if not outright thinking J/H are together somehow - "I'm waiting for Steven."