
10/25/2016 c1
50Maximillian Havisham
This was a really good one-shot. Much better than how things really played out imo. I really like the way you set up scenes and gave each word spoken meaning. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

This was a really good one-shot. Much better than how things really played out imo. I really like the way you set up scenes and gave each word spoken meaning. I thoroughly enjoyed this.
9/17/2016 c1
47Her Pretty Smile
This was beautiful. *cries* I wish it could have happened in the manga. It's very well-written, and the ending just got to me. It was striking. Thank you for writing this.

This was beautiful. *cries* I wish it could have happened in the manga. It's very well-written, and the ending just got to me. It was striking. Thank you for writing this.
3/18/2016 c1
117Mnemosyne's Elegy
I'm glad you actually did write out this scene after all. I really wish something like this happened in the manga. It would have been great closure for Ultear, Gray, and Meredy. It was all very touching, and there were a few lines in particular that were really powerful. I especially like the part with Gray reaching out to Ultear. Very well done. I feel like this kind of closure is something that the manga could have really used.

I'm glad you actually did write out this scene after all. I really wish something like this happened in the manga. It would have been great closure for Ultear, Gray, and Meredy. It was all very touching, and there were a few lines in particular that were really powerful. I especially like the part with Gray reaching out to Ultear. Very well done. I feel like this kind of closure is something that the manga could have really used.
3/16/2016 c1
16Red Okra
This was simply beautiful, and I think this portrays an amazing closure for Ultear's character and her relationship with Meredy and Gray, who both have special places in her hearts... Thank you for this!

This was simply beautiful, and I think this portrays an amazing closure for Ultear's character and her relationship with Meredy and Gray, who both have special places in her hearts... Thank you for this!
3/13/2016 c1
13myshippingdock
I've told you before and I will tell you again:) This has become my favorite story to over-read right now. It breaks my heart and pieces it together all at once and is exactly what I needed.:D I am glad you 'whined' because I needed to whine too 8D ULtear just deserves to be on the receiving end of love dammit and you delivered when Mashima didn't :P. ... maybe futile, but still tentatively crossing my fingers for Mashima to deliver something gentler for Utear at somepoint as final closure...

I've told you before and I will tell you again:) This has become my favorite story to over-read right now. It breaks my heart and pieces it together all at once and is exactly what I needed.:D I am glad you 'whined' because I needed to whine too 8D ULtear just deserves to be on the receiving end of love dammit and you delivered when Mashima didn't :P. ... maybe futile, but still tentatively crossing my fingers for Mashima to deliver something gentler for Utear at somepoint as final closure...
3/9/2016 c1 Crystal-Voices
Amazing, thank you for writing. I thought the recent chapter was so tragic and I was kinda sad a scene like this didn't happen in the manga so thanks for making it happen.
Amazing, thank you for writing. I thought the recent chapter was so tragic and I was kinda sad a scene like this didn't happen in the manga so thanks for making it happen.
3/8/2016 c1 Neceros
*ugly crying* This was beautiful. And I didn't realize how much I needed this, but oh, I did.
*ugly crying* This was beautiful. And I didn't realize how much I needed this, but oh, I did.