for Newborn7/8/2004 c1 
17Shadow Fox777
Did I mention that I love your Metroid fics? They are so carefuly written. YOu have a real nack for it. This story is Great.
17Shadow Fox777Did I mention that I love your Metroid fics? They are so carefuly written. YOu have a real nack for it. This story is Great.
5/8/2004 c1 72JayRain
A simply beautiful short piece of work. I always wonder how Samus feels reading the Chozo Lore, and the first-person perspective of Prime really puts me there, as her, and I feel all the conflicting emotions of the situation. You've done such a lovely job here conveying those emotions and giving us snippets of her past. The snatches of memory and conversation did so much for this piece. Bravo. ~J.
72JayRainA simply beautiful short piece of work. I always wonder how Samus feels reading the Chozo Lore, and the first-person perspective of Prime really puts me there, as her, and I feel all the conflicting emotions of the situation. You've done such a lovely job here conveying those emotions and giving us snippets of her past. The snatches of memory and conversation did so much for this piece. Bravo. ~J.
11/10/2003 c1 Tortie-chu
This is the first Metroid fic I've ever read, and damn my luck, it's probably the best one I'll ever read. So good, so very good.
This is the first Metroid fic I've ever read, and damn my luck, it's probably the best one I'll ever read. So good, so very good.
8/10/2003 c1 1NeoRaven
Very cool! Awesome insight into Samus that isn't the usual dark stuff I see so often.
1NeoRavenVery cool! Awesome insight into Samus that isn't the usual dark stuff I see so often.
1/29/2003 c1 Cythen
This was really well written. I think you should continue it. :)
This was really well written. I think you should continue it. :)