for The Uzumaki Phenex8/21/2017 c6 
1TheRageGamer
Hi I am sorry I am probably being an idiot and you mentioned it somewhere but are you still going to update the story and/or is it in your new account in a different name. Awesome chapter by the way, can't wait to see how Naruto performs in his first Rating game
1TheRageGamerHi I am sorry I am probably being an idiot and you mentioned it somewhere but are you still going to update the story and/or is it in your new account in a different name. Awesome chapter by the way, can't wait to see how Naruto performs in his first Rating game
8/20/2017 c2 Madgizmo
Slight correction on your author's note, Nekomata are not a nearly extinct species however the Nekoshou subspecies is nearly extinct with the only known members being Kuroka and Koneko.
Slight correction on your author's note, Nekomata are not a nearly extinct species however the Nekoshou subspecies is nearly extinct with the only known members being Kuroka and Koneko.
8/16/2017 c4 Metal Navy
Your story violates site rules.
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You can't have sexually explicit stories on the site. My suggestion is to move this to a site that allows MA stories such as AdultFanFiction or AO3. Or you can edit out all the MA content to keep it here.
Metal Navy
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Your story violates site rules.
Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference.
You can't have sexually explicit stories on the site. My suggestion is to move this to a site that allows MA stories such as AdultFanFiction or AO3. Or you can edit out all the MA content to keep it here.
Metal Navy
Critics United
8/11/2017 c5 Guest
(That you killed to protect her?" Naruto asked but shook his head "Wait a few years Kuroka, wait till she is old enough to understand your reason. )
Yes, that worked so well for Sasuke and Itachi. It worked so well for everyone in all of those situations, and you who has lived over a century should know that. It's kinda pointless drama to keep them apart really and a dumb one at that. Really that is the worst part of this story by far as the rest is quite good.
Hopefully such foolishness doesn't happen again...
(That you killed to protect her?" Naruto asked but shook his head "Wait a few years Kuroka, wait till she is old enough to understand your reason. )
Yes, that worked so well for Sasuke and Itachi. It worked so well for everyone in all of those situations, and you who has lived over a century should know that. It's kinda pointless drama to keep them apart really and a dumb one at that. Really that is the worst part of this story by far as the rest is quite good.
Hopefully such foolishness doesn't happen again...
8/3/2017 c2 6OriksGaming
Your grammar is awful and your often incorrect punctuation doesn't help either. Please, please, please get a beta. As your story is now, I find myself cringing every other line and I just can't enjoy it at all.
6OriksGamingYour grammar is awful and your often incorrect punctuation doesn't help either. Please, please, please get a beta. As your story is now, I find myself cringing every other line and I just can't enjoy it at all.
7/1/2017 c6 Yotsuba Tatsuya
I really didn't expect this story to be a really good one so I'm really happy that I decided to try reading it. It's all worth it. I've noticed that you haven't been updating this story for a while so I'm wishing that you will update it sooner than later. Kudos Author.
I really didn't expect this story to be a really good one so I'm really happy that I decided to try reading it. It's all worth it. I've noticed that you haven't been updating this story for a while so I'm wishing that you will update it sooner than later. Kudos Author.
6/19/2017 c6 Raku-san
great chapter, keep it up.. when will u update? haha cant wait for next chapter
great chapter, keep it up.. when will u update? haha cant wait for next chapter
5/30/2017 c6 lou2003us
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
5/21/2017 c3 1Blaze501st
ok yeah...your grammar kinda does suck...but it is not the worst that i have ever seen...soo keep at it...my suggestion...keep using spell check... and the biggest thing is to ask a friend or family member to read over it, as someone who took ENG121 in Collage and failed at it, that is the biggest suggestion that i can say sort of getting a beta reader
1Blaze501stok yeah...your grammar kinda does suck...but it is not the worst that i have ever seen...soo keep at it...my suggestion...keep using spell check... and the biggest thing is to ask a friend or family member to read over it, as someone who took ENG121 in Collage and failed at it, that is the biggest suggestion that i can say sort of getting a beta reader