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1InfernoKing
Definitely enjoying the story and can't wait for the next chapter! Wonder who's gonna be Naruto' last piece. Can't wait till next update! :)
1InfernoKingDefinitely enjoying the story and can't wait for the next chapter! Wonder who's gonna be Naruto' last piece. Can't wait till next update! :)
4/6/2017 c6 ZacaManic
Hey! Nice to see you back! Anyway, nice chapter, to be honest I am glad that the library arc isn't there any more. I mean it wasn't bad but it just seemed to lead nowhere.
Hey! Nice to see you back! Anyway, nice chapter, to be honest I am glad that the library arc isn't there any more. I mean it wasn't bad but it just seemed to lead nowhere.
3/31/2017 c6 1insanemaelstorm
That's great. It's great that this story is being continued. Although am a bit sad that your friend has left. Good to see you back. Can't wait to read more
1insanemaelstormThat's great. It's great that this story is being continued. Although am a bit sad that your friend has left. Good to see you back. Can't wait to read more
3/28/2017 c6 Poro0.0
Plot Twister, Never expect that you will take control of this account, good chapter keep it up
Plot Twister, Never expect that you will take control of this account, good chapter keep it up
3/28/2017 c5 NaruhinaloverUA
Nice story. Would love to read this story to the end. Keep up the good work and update soon.
Nice story. Would love to read this story to the end. Keep up the good work and update soon.
3/25/2017 c6 LeoTheSage
This is your very first chapter and you're already filling this story up with cheese. And why does Naruto not participate in the rating games. He has been interested in it since chapter 1. His peerage not being ready for the games is complete bullshit. Riser whith his untrained team had a record of 8-2 in the rating games, with the 2 losses being completely intentional. There is no doubt that Naruto has trained his team extensively for over 3 YEARS, so there is no reason why he would not have a better record than Riser. NO REASON
This is your very first chapter and you're already filling this story up with cheese. And why does Naruto not participate in the rating games. He has been interested in it since chapter 1. His peerage not being ready for the games is complete bullshit. Riser whith his untrained team had a record of 8-2 in the rating games, with the 2 losses being completely intentional. There is no doubt that Naruto has trained his team extensively for over 3 YEARS, so there is no reason why he would not have a better record than Riser. NO REASON
3/25/2017 c4 LeoTheSage
Hopefully Naruto doesn't turn into a bitch. Because I'm seeing hints of that. The whole cancel mode for the evil pieces is a horrible idea. It is and idealist way of thinking. I would expect a 100 year old Naruto to be more of realist who can see the obvious problems that something like that would cause.
Hopefully Naruto doesn't turn into a bitch. Because I'm seeing hints of that. The whole cancel mode for the evil pieces is a horrible idea. It is and idealist way of thinking. I would expect a 100 year old Naruto to be more of realist who can see the obvious problems that something like that would cause.
3/25/2017 c2 LeoTheSage
What's this? A main character who is not blushing 24/7 and is not nervous around females? Do you realize how refreshing that is? Im so tired of other authors doing that shit!
What's this? A main character who is not blushing 24/7 and is not nervous around females? Do you realize how refreshing that is? Im so tired of other authors doing that shit!
3/26/2017 c2 daniel 29
sometimes i wonder if naruto's female friends were reincarnated sense some of his peerage members are similar in looks and personalites
sometimes i wonder if naruto's female friends were reincarnated sense some of his peerage members are similar in looks and personalites
3/25/2017 c6 1raider of d lost soul
Nice story.. I would really love to read it to the end
Keep up the good work
1raider of d lost soulNice story.. I would really love to read it to the end
Keep up the good work
3/24/2017 c6 2Igor Namikaze
This story sucks, but there are many things that annoy me for being contradictory. At the beginning Naruto wants to be in the top ten in the ranking games like Ruval. Then he says that Naruto wants to participate in the fights, but he refuses all challenges, even when he is very strong and constantly trains his nobleman who is also very strong, he could very well beat most of the staff with only what he has, Kuroka, Xuelan and Karlamine taking the majority and Yabelluna taking away the opponent's anger, Naruto defeats the king. Just like that, Naruto can participate yes and he is old enough to do it, it would be bad his reputation, it seems that he is coward. Not to mention that history does not flow either. If you're going to continue this, make an improvement on it, make his family a reality shock on him, because he's just going around doing nothing.
About his opinion about the pieces of evil, yes they are fucked, but it is necessary that even the angels do it. Naruto at age 100 should get this straight. Wait for the story to continue and do not miss so many words to make Sayla bow, because the hiatoria has to continue and still have to reach the canon.
2Igor NamikazeThis story sucks, but there are many things that annoy me for being contradictory. At the beginning Naruto wants to be in the top ten in the ranking games like Ruval. Then he says that Naruto wants to participate in the fights, but he refuses all challenges, even when he is very strong and constantly trains his nobleman who is also very strong, he could very well beat most of the staff with only what he has, Kuroka, Xuelan and Karlamine taking the majority and Yabelluna taking away the opponent's anger, Naruto defeats the king. Just like that, Naruto can participate yes and he is old enough to do it, it would be bad his reputation, it seems that he is coward. Not to mention that history does not flow either. If you're going to continue this, make an improvement on it, make his family a reality shock on him, because he's just going around doing nothing.
About his opinion about the pieces of evil, yes they are fucked, but it is necessary that even the angels do it. Naruto at age 100 should get this straight. Wait for the story to continue and do not miss so many words to make Sayla bow, because the hiatoria has to continue and still have to reach the canon.