for The Uzumaki Phenex4/25/2017 c1 ginanjar
how about add character from tabbo tattoo, like "Kar sekar" or "iltumi" maybe. just a suggestion.
how about add character from tabbo tattoo, like "Kar sekar" or "iltumi" maybe. just a suggestion.
4/25/2017 c1 Guest
Update plz
Update plz
4/20/2017 c6 
3Mysterious Gamer X
I find this story well-written and simply fun to read. I'll be looking forward to seeing how it goes.
3Mysterious Gamer XI find this story well-written and simply fun to read. I'll be looking forward to seeing how it goes.
4/10/2017 c6 1InfernoKing
Definitely enjoying the story and can't wait for the next chapter! Wonder who's gonna be Naruto' last piece. Can't wait till next update! :)
1InfernoKingDefinitely enjoying the story and can't wait for the next chapter! Wonder who's gonna be Naruto' last piece. Can't wait till next update! :)
4/6/2017 c6 ZacaManic
Hey! Nice to see you back! Anyway, nice chapter, to be honest I am glad that the library arc isn't there any more. I mean it wasn't bad but it just seemed to lead nowhere.
Hey! Nice to see you back! Anyway, nice chapter, to be honest I am glad that the library arc isn't there any more. I mean it wasn't bad but it just seemed to lead nowhere.
3/31/2017 c6 1insanemaelstorm
That's great. It's great that this story is being continued. Although am a bit sad that your friend has left. Good to see you back. Can't wait to read more
1insanemaelstormThat's great. It's great that this story is being continued. Although am a bit sad that your friend has left. Good to see you back. Can't wait to read more
3/28/2017 c6 Poro0.0
Plot Twister, Never expect that you will take control of this account, good chapter keep it up
Plot Twister, Never expect that you will take control of this account, good chapter keep it up
3/28/2017 c5 NaruhinaloverUA
Nice story. Would love to read this story to the end. Keep up the good work and update soon.
Nice story. Would love to read this story to the end. Keep up the good work and update soon.
3/25/2017 c6 LeoTheSage
This is your very first chapter and you're already filling this story up with cheese. And why does Naruto not participate in the rating games. He has been interested in it since chapter 1. His peerage not being ready for the games is complete bullshit. Riser whith his untrained team had a record of 8-2 in the rating games, with the 2 losses being completely intentional. There is no doubt that Naruto has trained his team extensively for over 3 YEARS, so there is no reason why he would not have a better record than Riser. NO REASON
This is your very first chapter and you're already filling this story up with cheese. And why does Naruto not participate in the rating games. He has been interested in it since chapter 1. His peerage not being ready for the games is complete bullshit. Riser whith his untrained team had a record of 8-2 in the rating games, with the 2 losses being completely intentional. There is no doubt that Naruto has trained his team extensively for over 3 YEARS, so there is no reason why he would not have a better record than Riser. NO REASON
3/25/2017 c4 LeoTheSage
Hopefully Naruto doesn't turn into a bitch. Because I'm seeing hints of that. The whole cancel mode for the evil pieces is a horrible idea. It is and idealist way of thinking. I would expect a 100 year old Naruto to be more of realist who can see the obvious problems that something like that would cause.
Hopefully Naruto doesn't turn into a bitch. Because I'm seeing hints of that. The whole cancel mode for the evil pieces is a horrible idea. It is and idealist way of thinking. I would expect a 100 year old Naruto to be more of realist who can see the obvious problems that something like that would cause.
3/25/2017 c2 LeoTheSage
What's this? A main character who is not blushing 24/7 and is not nervous around females? Do you realize how refreshing that is? Im so tired of other authors doing that shit!
What's this? A main character who is not blushing 24/7 and is not nervous around females? Do you realize how refreshing that is? Im so tired of other authors doing that shit!