8/13/2016 c15 4MickDunD
Really liking this story. You're an amazing author and I can't wait for your next chapter. Please update soon.
Really liking this story. You're an amazing author and I can't wait for your next chapter. Please update soon.
8/12/2016 c15 1insanemaelstorm
Another great chapter. Really missed this story. Its amazing. Liked how naruto shows his concern for his peerage. Also loved the fight scenes. Can't wait to read more
Another great chapter. Really missed this story. Its amazing. Liked how naruto shows his concern for his peerage. Also loved the fight scenes. Can't wait to read more
8/12/2016 c2 MKaius
You wrote a really weird naruto, he is supposed to have been a hokage and to have lived over a hundred years, yet the way he acts reacts and talks doesn't reflect that at all.
You wrote a really weird naruto, he is supposed to have been a hokage and to have lived over a hundred years, yet the way he acts reacts and talks doesn't reflect that at all.
8/9/2016 c15 Guest
So his harem is his peerage and Rias also is his other Knight get the other sword's as well
So his harem is his peerage and Rias also is his other Knight get the other sword's as well
8/9/2016 c3 draxon
yes i want to see naruto with grayfia
yes i want to see naruto with grayfia
8/9/2016 c15 Guest
super
super
8/10/2016 c15 13Memnon45
Great chapter a little short but still great. Continue when you can, there is no rush.
Great chapter a little short but still great. Continue when you can, there is no rush.
8/10/2016 c15 1hellfire45
Good make more chapters and if momo is the one that will be his pawn it is possible to make it so she hasn't had to have sex for her career
Good make more chapters and if momo is the one that will be his pawn it is possible to make it so she hasn't had to have sex for her career
8/10/2016 c15 Sennybee98
I wonder if Naruto will ever reveal the truth of his origins to his family? Sorry if that sounded really off topic, I just wanted to leave a review of some sort since I can't seem to think of anything else to write.
I wonder if Naruto will ever reveal the truth of his origins to his family? Sorry if that sounded really off topic, I just wanted to leave a review of some sort since I can't seem to think of anything else to write.