for The Uzumaki Phenex8/10/2016 c11 
14the metaphysical god of heroes
You know to be honest i also was wondering why Naruto didn't forcibly take that book I mean he is a ninja right? Shouldn't he be used to stealing? Also he doesn't have to punch her but I got the feeling Naruto was REALLY desperate to take that book so why didn't he just use shadow clones to distract her then sneak a read of that book. Unless I forgot an important detail he should still have access to chakra evident in the hendge with that and shadow clones there were near limitless ways he could fool an old admittedly-alastor moody level of paranoia woman but she would never see it coming I hope you know this isn't a flame just a genuine review from my pov
14the metaphysical god of heroesYou know to be honest i also was wondering why Naruto didn't forcibly take that book I mean he is a ninja right? Shouldn't he be used to stealing? Also he doesn't have to punch her but I got the feeling Naruto was REALLY desperate to take that book so why didn't he just use shadow clones to distract her then sneak a read of that book. Unless I forgot an important detail he should still have access to chakra evident in the hendge with that and shadow clones there were near limitless ways he could fool an old admittedly-alastor moody level of paranoia woman but she would never see it coming I hope you know this isn't a flame just a genuine review from my pov
8/9/2016 c13 daniel 29
wonder if this is the first fiction story in this crossover series to have naruto in any form consider rias weird
wonder if this is the first fiction story in this crossover series to have naruto in any form consider rias weird
8/9/2016 c15 SPark681
Well this is getting good and soon the final showdown will begin wonder how that'll play out anyways keep up the great work!
Well this is getting good and soon the final showdown will begin wonder how that'll play out anyways keep up the great work!