for The Uzumaki Phenex8/9/2016 c15 
8Pencyke
Personally, because of the situation I don't think Naruto would be willing to put up with the mid-fight banter that went on in this chapter. Since he's here to save somebody I figured he'd say something along the lines of, "I don't care if you have a hundred abilities! I'll still kick your ass!"
Other than that, a lot of this chapter seemed disjointed, the transitions were jarring and there were details that could have been implied instead of spelled out. I'm sure most of that was because you were rushed and I hope for you to take your time in the future.
8PencykePersonally, because of the situation I don't think Naruto would be willing to put up with the mid-fight banter that went on in this chapter. Since he's here to save somebody I figured he'd say something along the lines of, "I don't care if you have a hundred abilities! I'll still kick your ass!"
Other than that, a lot of this chapter seemed disjointed, the transitions were jarring and there were details that could have been implied instead of spelled out. I'm sure most of that was because you were rushed and I hope for you to take your time in the future.
8/9/2016 c15 3Kami no Kage
And he returns! Not too shabby for getting back into it after a nice break. I also like that you're planning on going full force now and ending this arc soon to get to the next one, probably not a bad idea after that break. Glad to see you back!
3Kami no KageAnd he returns! Not too shabby for getting back into it after a nice break. I also like that you're planning on going full force now and ending this arc soon to get to the next one, probably not a bad idea after that break. Glad to see you back!