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Woww ... ! Es bueno saber que aún continuaras con tu historia espero poder leer el próximo capitulo . Ya quiero saber hasta donde llegarán a desarrollarse la nobleza de naruto.
2miguelgiuliano.coWoww ... ! Es bueno saber que aún continuaras con tu historia espero poder leer el próximo capitulo . Ya quiero saber hasta donde llegarán a desarrollarse la nobleza de naruto.
8/7/2016 c14 Delta3950
My dad's a douche, he calls Pokémon Pokeyman and evidently there are people calling Pokémon Go something like Moronmon Go or something like that because people are being stupid with it. Frankly I'm not wholly interested in Poke Go, simply because it's too time consuming, and while it would be nice to have something to do while I'm walking it takes your focus off of your surroundings making it easier for you to get mugged.
My dad's a douche, he calls Pokémon Pokeyman and evidently there are people calling Pokémon Go something like Moronmon Go or something like that because people are being stupid with it. Frankly I'm not wholly interested in Poke Go, simply because it's too time consuming, and while it would be nice to have something to do while I'm walking it takes your focus off of your surroundings making it easier for you to get mugged.
8/7/2016 c14 EnglishKitsune
Don't worry about the wait congratulations on your results hope you get into the university. Thanks for the update can't wait for next chapter
Don't worry about the wait congratulations on your results hope you get into the university. Thanks for the update can't wait for next chapter
7/31/2016 c2 Guest
It's a good story idea, but your grammar could use some work.
It's a good story idea, but your grammar could use some work.
8/1/2016 c8 Delta3950
I used to like Sasuke back when I first started watching the original show when I was 16, I thought he was cool. That was until he decided to abandon Konoha to join a man who I think is a pedophile just to get more power so that he could ultimately kill his brother, and then he turns around and tries to kill Naruto no less than three times(more than that if I recall actually), and Naruto through out it all was only going so hard as to make Sasuke return to the village. Had he been serious when he first tapped into Kurama's chakra rather than knocking him around like a Pinball he should have just gone for the neck and knocked him out, course that was Kishimoto's doing to begin with. Then later on in Shippuden he casts aside his "Team Mates" and stabs Karin just to kill Danzo. So yeah, I hate Sasuke and in my farting around when I get to the point in it(it's not being aired so don't bother asking about it), Naruto will rip out both of Sasuke's eyes, put them in a preservative fluid, and then knock his unstable ass out before sticking him into a Storage scroll for grievously injured parties.
I used to like Sasuke back when I first started watching the original show when I was 16, I thought he was cool. That was until he decided to abandon Konoha to join a man who I think is a pedophile just to get more power so that he could ultimately kill his brother, and then he turns around and tries to kill Naruto no less than three times(more than that if I recall actually), and Naruto through out it all was only going so hard as to make Sasuke return to the village. Had he been serious when he first tapped into Kurama's chakra rather than knocking him around like a Pinball he should have just gone for the neck and knocked him out, course that was Kishimoto's doing to begin with. Then later on in Shippuden he casts aside his "Team Mates" and stabs Karin just to kill Danzo. So yeah, I hate Sasuke and in my farting around when I get to the point in it(it's not being aired so don't bother asking about it), Naruto will rip out both of Sasuke's eyes, put them in a preservative fluid, and then knock his unstable ass out before sticking him into a Storage scroll for grievously injured parties.
8/1/2016 c7 Delta3950
I wonder what Sayla will say in regards to that book being unnecessary once she sees Naruto make a Rasengan or if he's ever forced to use the Kyubi cloak in her presence I'd bet 10 dollars that she'd either think it irrelevant or freak out that a book she considered unnecessary was in fact true.
I wonder what Sayla will say in regards to that book being unnecessary once she sees Naruto make a Rasengan or if he's ever forced to use the Kyubi cloak in her presence I'd bet 10 dollars that she'd either think it irrelevant or freak out that a book she considered unnecessary was in fact true.
8/1/2016 c3 Delta3950
You know if I recall none of Riser's(Naruto Phenix if you will) pieces were mutation pieces rather saddening to be honest unless if Naruto does have a mutation piece and they just don't know it yet. Once Vulpar is dead Naruto can suggest that Kuroka joins his Peerage if she desires, while Sirzechs has Shirone join Rias'. Naruto can if possible help Kuroka control her Senjutsu making her a truly terrifying Bishop.
You know if I recall none of Riser's(Naruto Phenix if you will) pieces were mutation pieces rather saddening to be honest unless if Naruto does have a mutation piece and they just don't know it yet. Once Vulpar is dead Naruto can suggest that Kuroka joins his Peerage if she desires, while Sirzechs has Shirone join Rias'. Naruto can if possible help Kuroka control her Senjutsu making her a truly terrifying Bishop.
8/1/2016 c2 Delta3950
That's up to you whether or not you write or rather type a lemon for this story sure the perverts would enjoy reading some, if not for the skill or detail in them then simply because they wish to read written smut. You know I just thought of something funny in away. Naruto may or may not remember all of Jiraiya's Icha-Icha works but if he does he can re-write them and get them published both in the Underworld and in the Over-World, wonder if you could write in a perverted female that can enter into his peerage someone with ocular abilities perhaps?
That's up to you whether or not you write or rather type a lemon for this story sure the perverts would enjoy reading some, if not for the skill or detail in them then simply because they wish to read written smut. You know I just thought of something funny in away. Naruto may or may not remember all of Jiraiya's Icha-Icha works but if he does he can re-write them and get them published both in the Underworld and in the Over-World, wonder if you could write in a perverted female that can enter into his peerage someone with ocular abilities perhaps?
8/1/2016 c1 Delta3950
Well of course it's going to be over-kill even I know that. Though I have to say some of the Sage of Six Paths powers are pretty useful. The resurrection of the Outer Path, the summoning of the Animal Path, and especially the transforming of the er which path was the machine? I think it was the Naraka Path, I think the Asura path was the one capable of absorbing chakra. Anyways just think even if it uses chakra just imagine turning your hand/arm into a Mega Buster or even the X buster? Oh my god I just thought of something that I bet no one ever thought to do in any fan fiction for the High School DXD series. You know how that psycho exorcist has that light sword of his? Well why not take it, and give it to a Devil researcher and start mass producing Devil Sabers?
Well of course it's going to be over-kill even I know that. Though I have to say some of the Sage of Six Paths powers are pretty useful. The resurrection of the Outer Path, the summoning of the Animal Path, and especially the transforming of the er which path was the machine? I think it was the Naraka Path, I think the Asura path was the one capable of absorbing chakra. Anyways just think even if it uses chakra just imagine turning your hand/arm into a Mega Buster or even the X buster? Oh my god I just thought of something that I bet no one ever thought to do in any fan fiction for the High School DXD series. You know how that psycho exorcist has that light sword of his? Well why not take it, and give it to a Devil researcher and start mass producing Devil Sabers?
7/27/2016 c1 Drako
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