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5/31/2023 c4 53EdTheBeast
A nice short story. Intriguing enough to get others to try it.
6/6/2020 c4 HoneyBear84
Love it
10/10/2017 c4 3WhiteElfElder
Yeah, I can't see Harry and group walking away without punishment from the ICW...and then I can see them turning around and giving the ICW the finger!
4/23/2017 c4 Ice Demon Ranger
Good reading, really good reading.
8/19/2016 c4 Fallow53
xxxx KUDOS xxxx : )
5/1/2016 c4 1flashbak35a
I know you still have Harry Potter and The Cochran Effect to complete but, I would love to see a sequel to this or even a one shot prequel.
3/30/2016 c4 NightSkyWolf
Great story please have a sequel
3/25/2016 c4 fraewyn
Love it! Hope you do make a sequel!
3/23/2016 c4 sh777
Just a note. US Cruisers are named after Cities. It was the Battleships named after states. But look forward to the rest.
3/17/2016 c1 Ori
I'd like to put some constructive criticism:
The story idea is sound and it look like you have a solid outline to the story, which is great. However, most of it feels like a summary.
First, you start with an action scene out of the blue. While the reader should have read the summary, you should expend in your story how it occured: have the US president decleared emergency before the attack, how the invasion occurred, what places were destroyed while others fought to the end.
Similarly, you should show Harry effort to secure wizardy resistance, and how the ICW refused. The mobilization of the DA and what exactly they did for months. How exactly Harry found out about SG1, and how the extraction was performed. Did they have any plan before deciding to get captured - imperio, veretserum, legilimancy, maybe stuff like aging potion to appear godly.
3/15/2016 c4 ak
bonne fic!
3/14/2016 c4 22stargatesg1fan1
Another entertaining story. I enjoyed the H/Hr pairing. I wonder what would be in store for SG-1 in the future. This seems like a good setup for a longer fic. Thanks for taking the time to share.
3/14/2016 c4 6JAIMOL
A magnificent story. I'll be careful if you write a sequel.
3/13/2016 c4 2BadReader
Needs a space station defense sequal to face off and survive the second wave. Some kind of moon sized hollowed out asteroid (or collection of them) with built in manufacturing and mining capabilities. Space mines, missiles, torpedos, fighter drones, hyperspace nuke missiles or hyperspace cannon, etc. Mass production warfare to face the 'elite' ships for a battle of attrition against superior numbers, followed by Tok'Ra created infighting to break up alliances. Asgard to distract enemy forces and prevent them from wanting to leave their planets unguarded. Tollan rise to create a secondary target for enemies. Possibly accept Tollan refugees if destroyed or weakened to merge with Earth society.
3/13/2016 c4 hpf2114
Well done. Full marks to you on giving us something new in this great crossover. Thank you for the time you put into this story. I for one greatly appreciate it. hope you give us more.
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