for Journey into darkness9/26/2018 c3 
3Savage theron
I would say your succeeding pretty well on making the readers know that Elsa is quite the immoral person. Hah, made it quite clear WHY she agreed to becoming a Vampire in a instant...
3Savage theronI would say your succeeding pretty well on making the readers know that Elsa is quite the immoral person. Hah, made it quite clear WHY she agreed to becoming a Vampire in a instant...
9/12/2018 c1 Infectedotter43
Glad to see you're still alive. And good chapter, will be waiting for the next.
Glad to see you're still alive. And good chapter, will be waiting for the next.
10/23/2017 c1 1rc48177
ooooohhhh, good work yet again my friend. May your days be fruitful and marked with plenty.
1rc48177ooooohhhh, good work yet again my friend. May your days be fruitful and marked with plenty.
10/16/2017 c9 Infectedotter43
I mean I don't hate her but I've always been the root for the villain kind of person. She is a ah.. grade A bitch. But yeah going good so far, I'm not sure where you're taking the story which is nice.
I mean I don't hate her but I've always been the root for the villain kind of person. She is a ah.. grade A bitch. But yeah going good so far, I'm not sure where you're taking the story which is nice.
11/1/2016 c6 Infectedotter43
Damn son, glad you posted but yeah it's been a while. Good chapter but short though hopefully setting up for good plot and lots of scheming
Damn son, glad you posted but yeah it's been a while. Good chapter but short though hopefully setting up for good plot and lots of scheming
6/4/2016 c5 Infectedotter43
Try having her use a man's sons corpse to attack his father and have him have to kill it. Also love the story and ofcourse looking forward to the next chapter.
Try having her use a man's sons corpse to attack his father and have him have to kill it. Also love the story and ofcourse looking forward to the next chapter.
5/4/2016 c3 Infectedotter43
Good, I like the angsty now but she isn't as unlikable but that's mainly due to putting more emphasis on her connection to her master rather than her with anyone else besides feeding on greta
Good, I like the angsty now but she isn't as unlikable but that's mainly due to putting more emphasis on her connection to her master rather than her with anyone else besides feeding on greta