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1/24/2017 c1 Guest
So freaking sad
3/20/2016 c1 12leonebrion
I'm now terribly sorry for Allen's loss as you made me feel the pain he was going through. That Allen had lost such an important friend. The flashbacks had really got to ne too, as the first reviewer said, it made it easier to feel what he was going through. So very poignant. Good job! I'm not sure if Allen ever took Tim for granted since he doesn't seem like the type to do that, but I'd think Allen would forget to estimate how important he was to him because of the war's events and all. It's make sense too, but that'd probably add to his guilt and regret.
3/17/2016 c1 sparklehannah
I was waiting for it. That you for doing this scene so well. The memories were a nice touch it made me wanna cry.

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