for Worm - Waterworks5/14 c25 
2Jack Inqu
Our ladies are making plans; it will be interesting to see how they all intersect and interact.
Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
2Jack InquOur ladies are making plans; it will be interesting to see how they all intersect and interact.
Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
5/12 c4 1HorusRa
Dáaaaaaaammmn Mr Herbert. That Is a Awesome, and Very Diplomatic, and Classy beatdown, Kudos
1HorusRaDáaaaaaaammmn Mr Herbert. That Is a Awesome, and Very Diplomatic, and Classy beatdown, Kudos
5/11 c3 HorusRa
Just looking the designs of your Armor, did you take inspiration from Ben 10 acuatic Menace Alien Form ? Because It could take ideas for it form for Taylor Cape Looks -
Just looking the designs of your Armor, did you take inspiration from Ben 10 acuatic Menace Alien Form ? Because It could take ideas for it form for Taylor Cape Looks -
5/6 c25 Guest
Awesome story! Great chapter to see Taylor preparing to move forward, I love that you've kept Taylor working to improve her relationship with her dad and her cooking. I wonder if Taylor will consider telling Danny about her powers at any point? It would be pretty OOC for her to actually tell Danny, but a look into her reasoning for that choice would be cool. Also loved the POV's from Amy and Vicky, lots of interesting plot points moving forward!
Awesome story! Great chapter to see Taylor preparing to move forward, I love that you've kept Taylor working to improve her relationship with her dad and her cooking. I wonder if Taylor will consider telling Danny about her powers at any point? It would be pretty OOC for her to actually tell Danny, but a look into her reasoning for that choice would be cool. Also loved the POV's from Amy and Vicky, lots of interesting plot points moving forward!
5/5 c25 AkaMagicpeanut
Liked the characterizations a lot in this chapter! Vicky just wanting punchable problems even as she's smart enough to do some sleuthing of her own is great lol. Amy still seems in shock but hey,that's a big change for the better in her life at least, assuming Carol doesn't do something irrational (in true grim Worm fashion, Carol would feel trapped by all this which would push her trigger trauma). I bet Tats is gonna end up being a second 'kidnapped' thinker receiving protection from our snakey friend Coil pretty soon lol. Will also be cool to see more of Tattletale in the story as she outThinks coil while trying to get to Riptide.
Always glad to see this story pop back up, keep up the good work!
Liked the characterizations a lot in this chapter! Vicky just wanting punchable problems even as she's smart enough to do some sleuthing of her own is great lol. Amy still seems in shock but hey,that's a big change for the better in her life at least, assuming Carol doesn't do something irrational (in true grim Worm fashion, Carol would feel trapped by all this which would push her trigger trauma). I bet Tats is gonna end up being a second 'kidnapped' thinker receiving protection from our snakey friend Coil pretty soon lol. Will also be cool to see more of Tattletale in the story as she outThinks coil while trying to get to Riptide.
Always glad to see this story pop back up, keep up the good work!
5/3 c25 llian-winter
Thanks for the chapter. I don't really remember what is going on in this fic. I might have to give it a reread if it's slow at work next week.
Thanks for the chapter. I don't really remember what is going on in this fic. I might have to give it a reread if it's slow at work next week.
5/1 c25 Guest
Good to see this story is not dead i hope the other w9rm story is not dead
Good to see this story is not dead i hope the other w9rm story is not dead
4/30 c25 Guest
wow
wow
4/30 c25 Guest
nice view from Vicky's side of things on the whole Amy situation and other stuff
nice view from Vicky's side of things on the whole Amy situation and other stuff
5/2 c25 SvenTheDecoy
good to see an update. not sure why we needed so much from any and vicky, but you're the author...
good to see an update. not sure why we needed so much from any and vicky, but you're the author...
5/2 c25 Limerick90
Carol getting forced to go to therapy? I definitely didn't expect that. I wonder what Sarah used to make her.
And Inspector Vicky is on the case, investigating the kidnapping of one Dinah Alcott! Let's see where the compartmentalization of the information surrounding that will lead. It would be just like Glory Girl to jump Riptide during a random patrol, though with the approach Vicky is taking here that seems unlikely, with her being past the instinctual, thoughtless reaction stage. Might still happen if she gets provoked somehow, but otherwise it might actually involve her doing some proper investigating. I'm looking forward to it if it is the case! It'd be even funnier if her and Lisa cross paths due to this, allowing Lisa to understand why Coil is fixated on Riptide.
Also, "some guy with a snake theme" is amusing and makes me wish for more stories where people hit Coil with the "I have no idea who you even are" treatment or he otherwise gets his ego checked. Before getting absolutely demolished of course.
Thanks for the chapter!
Carol getting forced to go to therapy? I definitely didn't expect that. I wonder what Sarah used to make her.
And Inspector Vicky is on the case, investigating the kidnapping of one Dinah Alcott! Let's see where the compartmentalization of the information surrounding that will lead. It would be just like Glory Girl to jump Riptide during a random patrol, though with the approach Vicky is taking here that seems unlikely, with her being past the instinctual, thoughtless reaction stage. Might still happen if she gets provoked somehow, but otherwise it might actually involve her doing some proper investigating. I'm looking forward to it if it is the case! It'd be even funnier if her and Lisa cross paths due to this, allowing Lisa to understand why Coil is fixated on Riptide.
Also, "some guy with a snake theme" is amusing and makes me wish for more stories where people hit Coil with the "I have no idea who you even are" treatment or he otherwise gets his ego checked. Before getting absolutely demolished of course.
Thanks for the chapter!
5/2 c25 1Alehhandro
The plot is chugging along and various players once again manage to slowly twist themselves into ribbons to braid together into a coherent storyline.
there's so many opportunities for conflict, i am happy to say that i cannot predict where you are going with this, progression-wise.
1AlehhandroThe plot is chugging along and various players once again manage to slowly twist themselves into ribbons to braid together into a coherent storyline.
there's so many opportunities for conflict, i am happy to say that i cannot predict where you are going with this, progression-wise.