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1/15/2019 c2 Deathscythex
I love this I wish you would continue it
5/29/2018 c1 Dilan rasoul
This is very awesome I would suggest you make this story on Wattpad it would also be very original because ice searched for this for a very long time and damn this story is good not to slow not to fast just perfect
1/28/2018 c1 RandomAccount1331
hey man dont know when this was last updated but come on man you had some good shit going on here so hey if you need someone to read thourgh it ill gladly do it
12/1/2017 c1 barksdale2468
This is a great story please update it
10/28/2017 c1 2marhaenaldi123
Please update
8/14/2017 c1 chrisharte111597
Your story is good, I like it a lot. And I think you should continue this story.
1/5/2017 c1 Spiderwl
Parfait! it's perfect!
11/9/2016 c1 Guest
I actually think that the notion of giving the RWBY characters Voidd is not a good idea. For someone to have a Void, they have to be infected with the virus. In Guilty Crown, everyone was infected, thus Shu can take Voids out from anyone. If the virus doesn't exist here and Shu's the only one that has it... I just think that it wouldn't really fit.
10/6/2016 c1 2superwirtter ik super chessy
great job you should keep writing (Did i already say that? Oh well).
7/11/2016 c1 randytpham
Fam this is sick! I never thought of this crossover before! MAKE MORE!
5/15/2016 c1 22EternalKing
Not many grammar or spelling mistakes that are really noticeable but you might need to watch out more for punctuation
Don't give carols void to anyone because voids are supposed to be unique. Also unlike in GC you should make it so only people who are ultimately true to their feelings and selves will be able to give voids, that way you could make it so people like Qrow and winter could be used(just a suggestion tho) I'll be looking forward to more.
5/8/2016 c1 HOLOCRON GOD
I think this is a great story. I hope to see more of the potential this story holds.
4/6/2016 c2 Joy
Live for yourself. I know what it feel like to have sadness and pain in your soul and heart. There is always light in your darkest hour. I been in a similar situation. I know what feel to end my life because of my family. It is terrifying to think about ending it. Find hope. Find someone that you know to bring you out of your depression. Go in peace and joy. I hope you find love one day.
4/6/2016 c2 Chad0615
All I can say is that you should seek help before it gets to the breaking point. And ingore the nay say from your family and continue trying to be the best you can be. Hope you find love and god bless you
4/6/2016 c1 3The Absolute Madman
I have an idea for sometype of harpoon gun.

Name of the void: the gun that shoots crystal harpoons(just make a name for it if you pick this).

who's void is it: some random schmuck or some such.

shape of void: a harpoon gun that can be held in your hands(its also a sword or a fencing sword if you make a whipping motion. the harpoons dont have any rope attached to it. it's also semi automatic)

effect/s of the void: it basically shoots stuff with harpoons... so when you hit a beowulf with it, the harpoon will impale it, and you can "retrieve" the harpoons by willing the harpoons to come back. thus rending it violently from said beowulf''s body. the harpoons work differently on a human or faunus with their aura active, though. the harpoon wont impale but cling on the person. the user can still rend the harpoon on the person's body for additional damage. the harpoons are crystal spikes that magically appear on the barrel of the gun whenever it will shoot. maximum harpoon ammo should be 30. Rend the harpoons to load more ammo count
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