for Harry Potter's Oath8/30/2024 c1 a fan of this
Honestly, this is missing a lot of content. It's not that the story has loose ends, it's that it's a giant loose end made of loose ends.
Honestly, this is missing a lot of content. It's not that the story has loose ends, it's that it's a giant loose end made of loose ends.
9/12/2022 c1 Guest
Well if you know you've left the story filled with loose ends, THEN FIX IT. It's not like this ficlet is all that long to begin with, so get to it - make it into a 2 or 3 chapter actual story! You can do this!
Well if you know you've left the story filled with loose ends, THEN FIX IT. It's not like this ficlet is all that long to begin with, so get to it - make it into a 2 or 3 chapter actual story! You can do this!
18/14/2021 c1 Guest
Up yours, asshole.
Up yours, asshole.
8/7/2021 c1 gginsc
Well, Hermione's "love" was rather shallow. Harry as a muggle wasn't good enough for her. I wish you had punished Dumbles. Sirius only gave money and forgot about Harry? At least Harry's daughter can now get the Potter estate.
Well, Hermione's "love" was rather shallow. Harry as a muggle wasn't good enough for her. I wish you had punished Dumbles. Sirius only gave money and forgot about Harry? At least Harry's daughter can now get the Potter estate.
10/26/2019 c1 Rebmul
if harry was in love with hermione and she cared for him why the hell would she set someone else up with him and why would he agree that ending makes no sense
if harry was in love with hermione and she cared for him why the hell would she set someone else up with him and why would he agree that ending makes no sense
10/22/2019 c1 Guest
Dumb and pointless to read. Shitty writing, and shittier plot with crap tactic ending.
Dumb and pointless to read. Shitty writing, and shittier plot with crap tactic ending.
6/18/2019 c1 Guest
Nice story but something goes wrong?
He declares of find out how he feels about hermione, not telling her somehow?
Lives with her parents (where he dumb enough like most fanfics feels he don't want to be burden to them) and they want to adopt but get sends elswhere wtf?
meanwhile things don't go so well for hermione why stay in school? cause he doesn't have magic anymore thinks not good enough for hermione or something? married another..
Like the story but this not really.
Nice story but something goes wrong?
He declares of find out how he feels about hermione, not telling her somehow?
Lives with her parents (where he dumb enough like most fanfics feels he don't want to be burden to them) and they want to adopt but get sends elswhere wtf?
meanwhile things don't go so well for hermione why stay in school? cause he doesn't have magic anymore thinks not good enough for hermione or something? married another..
Like the story but this not really.