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6/29/2016 c15 Sesshomaru is hot like hell
no why this chapter made me cry please update
6/6/2016 c14 1LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta
Well now I'm sure that Gohan is gonna wish Planet Vegeta and the Saiyans that was on the planet back. What would be funny is if when Bulma and Chichi found a reason for them to get Trunks and Goten back that when they started to go and get them that the sky went dark and they saw Shenron in the sky and knew that they'd never see those boys again. Now that would be funny. Oh yeah, is Gohan gonna go with them to Planet Vegeta or will he stay on Earth so he can keep a dragonball to keep anyone from using them unless it was necessary. Update again soon
5/18/2016 c13 Sesshomaru is hot like hell
please update
5/17/2016 c13 LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta
Why was Chichi there? Is she gonna try to do something to Goten? If she does who will catch her before she gets to him? Why is she coming around in the first place? She thinks they're all freaks. I'm hoping that Gohan and Videl are getting the dragonballs to wish planet Vegeta back so that they can go live there. He can even take Videl with him. I hope that's what he has planned anyway. Update again soon
5/5/2016 c12 LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta
Lovely, dovey is always good. Poor Trunks and Goten. I'm glad that those two bitches won't ever be around them again. Why the hell was Chichi calling Gohan for? He's a Saiyan just like his Dad, Goten, Trunks and Vegeta which her and Bulma have labeled them as freaks. Update again soon
5/5/2016 c12 Sesshomaru is hot like hell
love it please update
5/5/2016 c11 Sesshomaru is hot like hell
please update
4/27/2016 c11 Sesshomaru is hot like hell
please update soon
4/26/2016 c3 1fangurlsrule
Ok so yaoi is not really my cup of tea but im bored so I figured I would give this a shot. Your story isnt bad let me say that first, but there are some things you could work on. For one im sure you know your spelling needs work, if you are doing this on a computer almost all office or wordpad applications have some sort of a spell check and even if it doesn't fix the problem it can help. Trust me I have trouble with spelling too. Also could you put some space between your paragraphs, ot is kinda difficult to read right now. Also give the characters more depth, why does vegeta want to leave bulma? Why is chichi being a bitch? Things like that. Otherwise good job, it takes a lot of guys to post your story and I commend you for it.
4/25/2016 c11 1LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta
I bet there gonna wish Planet Vegeta back. OMFG I wanna beat the hell out of Bulma and Chichi. I just can't believe that Bulma would say that to Trunks, that's just plain out being a sorry ass mother. Don't even get me started on Chichi. I'd like to bitch slap her for hurting Goten. I wonder how Gohan will react when he finds out what Chichi done to Goten? Update again soon
4/13/2016 c10 LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta
Hmm I bet Gohan and Videl were looking for the dragonballs. Wonder what they're gonna wish for? Bad, bad Bulma! That was down right mean of you to call Vegeta and Goku freaks. You've been best friends with Goku since he was about Goten's age and you had a son with Vegeta, so of course that was gonna hurt Goku when you said that. Update again soon. Take care of school first though.
4/7/2016 c9 LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta
Hmm I thought Bulma already knew about Goku being pregnant but I guess she just knew that Vegeta and Goku loved each other. Wonder how things are gonna pan out when the truth is revealed? What will be the reactions of Bulma and Chichi when they find out about the baby? Will the dream that Goku had come true? Update again soon
4/5/2016 c8 LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta
Well if it's a boy then I'd name him Gogeta since he is part of both of them. If it's a girl I'd name her Cali a short name for cauliflower without the u. Well I wonder if Bulma can talk to Chichi and calm her down? Does Trunks know? What does he think about it? What will Goten think when they tell him? What will the reaction of their friends? Update again soon
4/2/2016 c7 LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta
I hope that Gohan is ashamed of how he treated his dad and I think that Chichi is still in shock over everything. Poor Goten, he always gets the shitty end of the deal when it comes to his dad. What will be the reactions of the friends and family when Vegeta and Goku reveal that they are in love with each other and that Goku is now pregnant. Of course their all gonna have questions, so Vegeta will have to explain everything concerning their race. Update again soon
3/31/2016 c6 LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta
Well I'm glad that Bulma's ok with it but Bulma only wants to know if they love each other and she fine with it. Now Chichi may be a different story but she could surprise everyone and say that she knew that things weren't great in their marriage anymore and she was gonna talk to Goku about getting a divorce before all this happened. Vegeta needs to tell Lohan that he hurt Goku's feelings and that if he has a problem with them being together then that's his problem but they love each other and that wasn't gonna change. Vegeta needs to go ahead and tell Goku that he is pregnant. Then he needs to talk to Bulma about checking Goku out. Update again soon
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