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11/29/2020 c22 chucksboxers
Re-read! I always remember this chapter because it was such a cool way to have Chuck and Ellie have a private moment about Sarah but still tell the story from Sarah’s perspective. It’s awesome!
11/21/2020 c7 mattywilkss
is this how the rest of the story is going to be? a shortish chapter followed by an incredibly long sex scene? this is getting less romantic and more pornographic.
11/22/2020 c30 8Reyes9
Awesome last couple of chapters. Love it. Keep up the good work and update soon.
11/21/2020 c20 chucksboxers
It is kind of hilarious to think of Chuck snorkeling in a wetsuit for some reason so well done! Thanks for this SSC!
11/14/2020 c17 chucksboxers
So intense, so good.
11/11/2020 c15 chucksboxers
“ You don’t like surprises?”
Love that callback line and the context you used it in. Just, well, awesome!
10/31/2020 c30 Guest
Have thoroughly enjoyed every chapter of this story. Let me comment in general on the mature content. I think you handle it masterfully. Let's face it, Sarah uses the physical to express the emotional and each scene has served a purpose to move her/them forward in their intimacy. Intimacy is what Sarah struggles with as well
as feeling worthy of the man she has found herself drawn to. Sex can be strictly physical or it can express the emotional-in this case, I think you have shown her use it as a distraction from her emotions and a conduit for her emotions. This particular Sarah character and her internal dialog resonate most closely with the Sarah character of the show in my opinion and I think that's why I enjoy it so much.

As for this chapter and the plot, me thinks Chuck is about to experience some danger and find out about Sarah's true occupation. In so doing, I think Sarah is going to be surprised by Chuck again. I also think Eve Shaw is not who she says she is. I think she is the Scarlet Eye. I also think Sarah is going to experience some of the green eye of jealousy. Chuck and brunette's is a canon meme, so it wouldn't shock me in the least. Saint-Raphael is going to be a wild ride. Bring it on.

All I know is you are doing a great job, and as long as you are posting, I am reading. Whatever muse you rely on, keep going to that well. And thank you for sharing your talents. This story is one of my favorite escapes.
10/31/2020 c30 3Dlitt76
I've loved reading this, its a shame that you've had comments about the sex scenes. I'm looking forward to Saint Raphael and her inevitable victory over her demons. Wink.
10/22/2020 c4 chucksboxers
Even a reread makes me smile reading it!
10/20/2020 c3 chucksboxers
Just needed some SSC magic so rereading this great story of yours!
10/3/2020 c7 Richard76310
To me your telling of their love making ,yes you describe them making love not screwing, is soft loving sensual experience between them. Nothing overly graphic or smutty. Worried about her meeting for Graham.
10/2/2020 c28 bradk30609
Keep up the writing. This tale is really one to... Follow! :D
9/30/2020 c30 michaelfmx
So...even though some of Sarah's decisions are continuing to make me want to pull my hair out, it seems like I owe her an apology. If part of her reasons for keeping things from Chuck were to keep him safe, then it seems that her perception that her past could put him in danger were right on. So...sorry about that Sarah.

With that said, I'm still frustrated. I mean, what did she think Chuck would do when she gave him the silent treatment? Just go away and leave her alone? Could she really be that surprised to find him at her door? And then she tried the 'get angry and hope he leaves out of anger' tactic, but that didn't work so well either. So now her solution is...to take him with her. Is there any way she gets through the next few days without him finding out about her real job somehow? I really hope she makes a decision here soon to tell him at least some truths. I just don't see how they get through this trip without some confessions. But then again, maybe I'll be surprised.

One last thing stood out in this chapter. Is Sarah so preoccupied with Chuck and how to deal with him that she's failing to consider that Evelyn Shaw could actually be the Scarlet Eye? Sarah seems to have assumed that it's a man, but I don't think Evelyn said that. And Sarah has nothing but Evelyn's word that Graham sent her, she never verified it. Something seems a bit fishy there. I would think if word was out that someone was after Sarah, Casey would have let her know.

Sigh...lots of unknowns out there right now. Hopefully we see some resolutions soon.
9/29/2020 c29 michaelfmx
Well...I think I have mixed feelings about this chapter, and specifically about Sarah. Of course I love the way they continue to find ways of getting closer to each other, both intimately and emotionally. Chuck is everything that Sarah needs right now and she has been a Godsend for his confidence.

But I think that enough is enough with Sarah. Her hesitance and trepidation have been understandable up until the last couple of chapters. Trying to decide and then deciding to quit the CIA, trying to find herself in the normal world while trying to figure out what it is she feels for Chuck. The slow journey to discovery has been exquisite. But I find myself going from understanding her plight and being patient tight her, to becoming a bit irritated.

She MUST know that she’s reached and past that point in her relationship with Chuck where the lack of trust will start to be an issue. After all the life changing moments she’s had, after Chuck being there for her and saying the right things at the right moments, she continues to lie to him. And she can’t convince me that this is still for his own good and for his protection. This is now about her, dare I say it, cowardice and self preservation?
Simply put, she has to tell him the truth, and she has to tell him now. Her admissions about how she felt about her job in this chapter just make no sense with a job as a translator, and Chuck will see that. The right thing to do is tell him the truth now, and let the chips fall where they may. I’m not sure how much more I can take of Sarah continuing to lie to Chuck. She’s past the point of diminishing returns.
9/29/2020 c30 Deathzbreath
Loved it as always! Looking forward to more!
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