10/16/2020 c74 29EDD17SP
Windigo is hilarious. This chapter is fantastic. Probably the best one so far.
Glad I still have 26 more to go until I’m caught up. Absolutely loving this story.
Windigo is hilarious. This chapter is fantastic. Probably the best one so far.
Glad I still have 26 more to go until I’m caught up. Absolutely loving this story.
10/14/2020 c60 EDD17SP
Pacifica’s character arc is masterfully written. Slowly but surely starting to enjoy being silly and going adventuring, but there’s still the part of her that’s accustomed to certain luxuries and such. Most people would probably just rush through that change. (I haven’t read much Gravity Falls fanfiction, but based on how people usually write character arcs in other fandoms...)
Pacifica’s character arc is masterfully written. Slowly but surely starting to enjoy being silly and going adventuring, but there’s still the part of her that’s accustomed to certain luxuries and such. Most people would probably just rush through that change. (I haven’t read much Gravity Falls fanfiction, but based on how people usually write character arcs in other fandoms...)
10/14/2020 c56 EDD17SP
I felt this chapter. I felt exactly what Dipper felt without being there. It’s similar to the way I feel when I go to my grandparents’ house for a visit, 600 miles from where I live. It’s home just as much if not more, though without the entire *crew* that Dipper and Mabel have.
I felt this chapter. I felt exactly what Dipper felt without being there. It’s similar to the way I feel when I go to my grandparents’ house for a visit, 600 miles from where I live. It’s home just as much if not more, though without the entire *crew* that Dipper and Mabel have.
10/8/2020 c15 EDD17SP
I find your altering of real-world things into slightly-sillier cartoon-world things very, very amusing.
I find your altering of real-world things into slightly-sillier cartoon-world things very, very amusing.
10/7/2020 c2 EDD17SP
Your writing style is awesome and two chapters in I already know I’m going to become addicted to reading this and it’s going to distract me from my own writing.
Your writing style is awesome and two chapters in I already know I’m going to become addicted to reading this and it’s going to distract me from my own writing.
10/3/2020 c68 Sharky is me
my favorite part was when ford said "he's doing squats-I'll spare you the details" this story is really something else, its one of my favorites
my favorite part was when ford said "he's doing squats-I'll spare you the details" this story is really something else, its one of my favorites
10/2/2020 c100 H.G.Denizen
Oh man, way to go Dipper. And congrats on 100 chapters! The fact you have managed to maintain such consistency throughout them all is a feat a lot of published authors (of course I wouldn't be surprised if you have had work published haha, I don't want to imply otherwise) cannot achieve, and I thoroughly commend you for it. I'm glad you're continuing to enjoy writing them, and I look forward to the next one!
Oh man, way to go Dipper. And congrats on 100 chapters! The fact you have managed to maintain such consistency throughout them all is a feat a lot of published authors (of course I wouldn't be surprised if you have had work published haha, I don't want to imply otherwise) cannot achieve, and I thoroughly commend you for it. I'm glad you're continuing to enjoy writing them, and I look forward to the next one!
10/2/2020 c100 9Leech101
Congrats on one-hundred chapters! This fic has been really great the whole way through. The characters feel so much like they do for the show and in a little way it helps me feel like you're keeping a little piece of it going. I just wanted to voice my support and wish you all the best going forward!
Congrats on one-hundred chapters! This fic has been really great the whole way through. The characters feel so much like they do for the show and in a little way it helps me feel like you're keeping a little piece of it going. I just wanted to voice my support and wish you all the best going forward!