for Anyway, I've Been There4/24/2023 c40 Scarlett-Parker-19
I've discovered an amazing series...
YEARS after it's publishing!
Whyyyyyyyy
I've discovered an amazing series...
YEARS after it's publishing!
Whyyyyyyyy
4/24/2023 c38 Scarlett-Parker-19
Agiaxxggivicavixabaxibaivxziax
They kissed!
Why am I so down for this?
At first I was just like, "ok I kinda like this ship, they be cute together"
Now it's just the most awesome thingggggg
Agiaxxggivicavixabaxibaivxziax
They kissed!
Why am I so down for this?
At first I was just like, "ok I kinda like this ship, they be cute together"
Now it's just the most awesome thingggggg
4/24/2023 c36 Scarlett-Parker-19
I feel Dipper's embarrassment right now.
Flashbacks to all the times my siblings find out about a crush I have.
And I have 7 siblings.
I feel Dipper's embarrassment right now.
Flashbacks to all the times my siblings find out about a crush I have.
And I have 7 siblings.
4/24/2023 c21 Scarlett-Parker-19
Pacifica: "Yeah, right. Because I lay awake at night thinking about him"
Later...
Pacifica: (thinking about Dipper)
Pacifica: "Uh-oh."
Pacifica: "Yeah, right. Because I lay awake at night thinking about him"
Later...
Pacifica: (thinking about Dipper)
Pacifica: "Uh-oh."
4/23/2023 c7 Scarlett-Parker-19
"Tell Waddles I said hi, and that I wish he was here because I haven't had fresh bacon in months."
O mah goodness I have never laughed so hard
This is SO in character, too!
"Tell Waddles I said hi, and that I wish he was here because I haven't had fresh bacon in months."
O mah goodness I have never laughed so hard
This is SO in character, too!
4/16/2023 c121 ShimShimaPan
Great chapter! A good exploration of the deeper chambers of the Omega ship, as always you do a really good job of really bringing out the detail in your locations through apt descriptions of the sights, sounds, even smells of what they're going through as they trudge through the waterlogged metal confines of the alien ship. Had a good time reading through the physical challenges as well as them figuring out how to drain other parts of the ship to make it all the way to the bottom, a good adventure chapter.
Definitely had a dark turn with Wendy in the final stage there. I know Wendy being cool and unshakable under pressure is one of her best traits but I think everyone was taken off guard with just how seemingly okay she was with letting herself be sacrificed to procure the data in the computer, Dipper's reaction was on point. It kind of reminds me of talks she had earlier in the fic where she was talking about how, when thinking about her future, just being ALIVE would be a good start. It was great to see her want to take on work with Ford for safeguarding weird phenomenon and seeing her plot a course for college and her future for getting it done, but now I'm concerned if she's taking her committal too far and if there will be any other instances of this in the future where she's not thinking of her own well-being enough.
The end of the summer is also fast approaching and I am curious how Mabel/Dipper will be dealing with their upcoming departure again. I think Dipper's concern is fair, business ISN'T concluded yet here with the hearts, and in general it's clear how important the valley is to both of the twins and why it's so hard to leave. But the options seem limited in what they can do: try to force their parents to move to Gravity Falls, or ask them to let go of their kids to live out their informative years in another state without them? One thing I liked earlier in this fic was how Ford admitted that making Dipper abandon everything for an apprenticeship was too impulsive a decision, and both the kids were owed a proper education and childhood before deciding what to do with their lives, but do the twins still believe that? Either way, i get the feeling the only way a resolution will be had is if they eventually come clean to them about what the Falls really are
Great chapter! A good exploration of the deeper chambers of the Omega ship, as always you do a really good job of really bringing out the detail in your locations through apt descriptions of the sights, sounds, even smells of what they're going through as they trudge through the waterlogged metal confines of the alien ship. Had a good time reading through the physical challenges as well as them figuring out how to drain other parts of the ship to make it all the way to the bottom, a good adventure chapter.
Definitely had a dark turn with Wendy in the final stage there. I know Wendy being cool and unshakable under pressure is one of her best traits but I think everyone was taken off guard with just how seemingly okay she was with letting herself be sacrificed to procure the data in the computer, Dipper's reaction was on point. It kind of reminds me of talks she had earlier in the fic where she was talking about how, when thinking about her future, just being ALIVE would be a good start. It was great to see her want to take on work with Ford for safeguarding weird phenomenon and seeing her plot a course for college and her future for getting it done, but now I'm concerned if she's taking her committal too far and if there will be any other instances of this in the future where she's not thinking of her own well-being enough.
The end of the summer is also fast approaching and I am curious how Mabel/Dipper will be dealing with their upcoming departure again. I think Dipper's concern is fair, business ISN'T concluded yet here with the hearts, and in general it's clear how important the valley is to both of the twins and why it's so hard to leave. But the options seem limited in what they can do: try to force their parents to move to Gravity Falls, or ask them to let go of their kids to live out their informative years in another state without them? One thing I liked earlier in this fic was how Ford admitted that making Dipper abandon everything for an apprenticeship was too impulsive a decision, and both the kids were owed a proper education and childhood before deciding what to do with their lives, but do the twins still believe that? Either way, i get the feeling the only way a resolution will be had is if they eventually come clean to them about what the Falls really are
3/23/2023 c121 TheJelloSquid
Given the fact that I've binge read this thing I think I at the least should say something, although I'm not in the essay writing business.
Love the story, characters and expansion of the universe. All of it seems to follow up on potentials within the show itself while greatly respecting its own origin, and all the characters presented within it. I liked the confrontation with Gideon espescially because it high-lighted this respect for the characters and an awareness as to who they are., at least it did to me.
I also like the fact that there is a focus on the adventuring/mystery part of the story which seems to be constant, and that it is respected as a core part of all the characters. It makes their lives more lived, or filled out and real if that makes sense.
Anyways, that is all I have to say about that. Thank you for your time and effort, it is a wonderful story.
Given the fact that I've binge read this thing I think I at the least should say something, although I'm not in the essay writing business.
Love the story, characters and expansion of the universe. All of it seems to follow up on potentials within the show itself while greatly respecting its own origin, and all the characters presented within it. I liked the confrontation with Gideon espescially because it high-lighted this respect for the characters and an awareness as to who they are., at least it did to me.
I also like the fact that there is a focus on the adventuring/mystery part of the story which seems to be constant, and that it is respected as a core part of all the characters. It makes their lives more lived, or filled out and real if that makes sense.
Anyways, that is all I have to say about that. Thank you for your time and effort, it is a wonderful story.
3/15/2023 c121 GeneralLethargy
Just wanted to say that I have been really enjoying this story. I particularly appreciate the different styles and flows in the internal monologs of the individual characters.
Just wanted to say that I have been really enjoying this story. I particularly appreciate the different styles and flows in the internal monologs of the individual characters.
3/4/2023 c121 
2TigerYoshiiii
Potential sub plot ideas:
1. Dipper and Mables parents come and stay at gravity falls for the week (the day the parents leave is the day the kids leave so it’s this weird arrangement where the parents come for a week and then take the kids back). Either that or because of the weirdness magnetism thing, the kids back over the school year, unknowingly ‘infected’ their parents with weirdness and causes something to happen to them. Either way I want them to find out, go through a stage of distrust but then seeing how well the kids behave in bad scenarios and how the kids are able to handle the weirdness, they let them do what I believe I said in a previous comment, which is that they let the kids stay and grow up in gravity falls with their uncles.
2. Reignite Gruncle Stan’s crush on Lazy Susan, who, at least that I remember, hasn’t been seen in this story yet. Come to think of it, I don’t remember any of the OG side characters besides Pacifica appearing, only the new people you’ve made. Toby, the teens (besides Wendy), the “git ‘im” guy, Manly Dan, Fiddleford, Etc
3… sorta. I’m not sure if you are going to end this series before or after the end of summer but if it’s after I think you should have this thing with this legal court case over who gets ahold of Pacifica and ends with the twins’ parents getting custody of her (I’m not sure if that’s how it works).
4. Bill’s last words at the end of the finale come into fruition. (“A-X-O-L-O-T-L, my time has come to burn! I invoke the ancient power that I may return!")
2TigerYoshiiiiPotential sub plot ideas:
1. Dipper and Mables parents come and stay at gravity falls for the week (the day the parents leave is the day the kids leave so it’s this weird arrangement where the parents come for a week and then take the kids back). Either that or because of the weirdness magnetism thing, the kids back over the school year, unknowingly ‘infected’ their parents with weirdness and causes something to happen to them. Either way I want them to find out, go through a stage of distrust but then seeing how well the kids behave in bad scenarios and how the kids are able to handle the weirdness, they let them do what I believe I said in a previous comment, which is that they let the kids stay and grow up in gravity falls with their uncles.
2. Reignite Gruncle Stan’s crush on Lazy Susan, who, at least that I remember, hasn’t been seen in this story yet. Come to think of it, I don’t remember any of the OG side characters besides Pacifica appearing, only the new people you’ve made. Toby, the teens (besides Wendy), the “git ‘im” guy, Manly Dan, Fiddleford, Etc
3… sorta. I’m not sure if you are going to end this series before or after the end of summer but if it’s after I think you should have this thing with this legal court case over who gets ahold of Pacifica and ends with the twins’ parents getting custody of her (I’m not sure if that’s how it works).
4. Bill’s last words at the end of the finale come into fruition. (“A-X-O-L-O-T-L, my time has come to burn! I invoke the ancient power that I may return!")
3/1/2023 c121 Andyalix
This my first time logging in just to make a review on this Fanfiction
Is amazing, I just read chapter 1 to 121 in 5 days
Never liked gravity falls when I was a kid didn't know English back then but when I rewatch this year it's actually quite a masterpiece of a show and wanted to see more like season 3 and this the closest storyline for season 3, I'd give this a 9/10 (is not 10/10 beacuse I wanted to see more "making out" with dipper and Pacifica or maybe cause I'm depressed for love story)
But I hope this story will continue. still a lot of explaining for the mystery of Windigo, hawk origami and heart maze. Still, take your time making this story, beacuse we all have probelms in life.
This my first time logging in just to make a review on this Fanfiction
Is amazing, I just read chapter 1 to 121 in 5 days
Never liked gravity falls when I was a kid didn't know English back then but when I rewatch this year it's actually quite a masterpiece of a show and wanted to see more like season 3 and this the closest storyline for season 3, I'd give this a 9/10 (is not 10/10 beacuse I wanted to see more "making out" with dipper and Pacifica or maybe cause I'm depressed for love story)
But I hope this story will continue. still a lot of explaining for the mystery of Windigo, hawk origami and heart maze. Still, take your time making this story, beacuse we all have probelms in life.
2/21/2023 c121 9Sacredstar Mentor
I’m happy to Dipper no getting injured again. I also liked the way he saved Wendy too.
9Sacredstar MentorI’m happy to Dipper no getting injured again. I also liked the way he saved Wendy too.
2/19/2023 c1 Guest
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2/17/2023 c121 DTH
Happy New Year and thanks for the update!
Happy New Year and thanks for the update!