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2/11/2023 c18 7Dragon Blaze-X
Love these knuckleheads
2/11/2023 c18 3OechsnerC
Awesome update. Looking forward to reading more.
2/11/2023 c18 gwb620
Excellent chapter!
2/10/2023 c18 54Death Fury
Excellent chapter
2/10/2023 c18 14KuriMaster13
XD
Well, those negotiations were funny.
2/10/2023 c18 Speed Reader
Great story. Love your take on Ben's entrance and impact into the Young Justice universe.
2/10/2023 c18 1Ultimatrix bearer
I found the banter much funnier than I should have.

KEEP BEING AWESOME!
2/10/2023 c18 4ArufaForOne
woop
2/10/2023 c18 mrAZman34
Wrong story
2/10/2023 c18 ArufaForOne
wrong story
2/10/2023 c18 3Marc Ello-Re Yes
This is the wrong fic man. this is the Ben 10 Young Justice, not the Ben 10 Avengers.
2/10/2023 c18 15Rhaza3517
Ok, first real review I've done in a while, so... in all of the fights, you seem to be jumping back and forth between instances that have already happened, like Black Spider yanking away Robin's sticks, Kaldur bashing Hook and damaging his weapon, and Ben webbing up Cheshire and dodging her attacks while on the roof. I'd see about making sure such action takes place and flows forward rather than jumping back and forth between actions that have already occurred, checking to make sure that you don't have parts that are saying the same thing again. Dialogue is good and humorous, so keep that going. :D
2/10/2023 c18 3OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla
Spidermonkey for the win! Cheshire had no chance.

Kid Flash is kidnapped and the young heroes face an ultimatum: surrender Selena Gonzalez or Kid Flash dies.

That escalated quickly.
2/10/2023 c18 5Gamelover41592
excellent work on this chapter
2/10/2023 c18 32Gundam-Knight-Chris
And this story is dead to me.
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