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3/25/2016 c1 Crazyforshinichi
Sounds interesting... Waiting for more.
3/25/2016 c1 4Lured by the Song of Sirens
I feel like I just watched an exciting teaser for the final showdown. So hyped. I am hopeful this longer fic will tie in to the angst Shinich/Ran oneshot you wrote.

Your first chapter is fairly well written. I mean it's been 800 words so you'll have to forgive me for withholding judgement somewhat. Anyways I'm holding hope for this story. So good luck! Can't wait to see what you have planned.

Writing wise, your strength is definitely in imagery and you play to that which is good. The way you format your story is somewhat odd though and can be somewhat jarring. Specifically the way you use dashes to abruptly cut to a new sentence, and the superfluous use of parenthesis.

Looking forward to Ch. 2
3/25/2016 c1 1The Pearl Queen
Oh My God. I love your way in writing this one
3/24/2016 c1 Tsunayoshi Decimo
Yay! A Shinichi torture fic! Please update! I love it!
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