for Innocence7/13/2016 c1 
143rebecca-in-blue
It's rare to find a well-written, humorous story about the Death Eaters, but you accomplish that perfectly here. You capture Lucius's personality so well with him craving calm, quiet, and good manners, and I love his reaction to seeing Bellatrix doing something "seemingly" normal. You also write Snape's dialogue very well, and I heard it all in Alan Rickman's voice. Wonderful work.
143rebecca-in-blueIt's rare to find a well-written, humorous story about the Death Eaters, but you accomplish that perfectly here. You capture Lucius's personality so well with him craving calm, quiet, and good manners, and I love his reaction to seeing Bellatrix doing something "seemingly" normal. You also write Snape's dialogue very well, and I heard it all in Alan Rickman's voice. Wonderful work.