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4/8/2019 c1 31The DarkCat
Alright, that was interesting, I liked how everything everted in the ending, making it nearly an ideal Sotoba,that was so sweet. Making Abel and Cain's story cliser to Shiki was a good idea, and something different! Oh, and I think it's Seishin not Seshin... And try to capitalize letters when inside dialogue clauses. Anyway besides the mistakes, this was a cool one shot.
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