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This is a great gamer story. Please increase upload speed.
This is a great gamer story. Please increase upload speed.
6/16 c1 carol jon
A breathtaking journey that transcends mere storytelling, this work masterfully weaves heartache, triumph, and self-discovery into a rich tapestry of human emotion. Each character breathes with a vitality that is both flawed and deeply authentic, inviting readers to find fragments of their own joys, sorrows, and hopes mirrored within their arcs. With every twist and revelation, the narrative doesn’t just unfold it envelops, immersing the reader in a world that feels at once timeless and intimately familiar. This is not merely a story to be read, but a profound emotional experience to be felt, savored, and revisited. It leaves an indelible imprint, echoing long after the final page has been turned.
A breathtaking journey that transcends mere storytelling, this work masterfully weaves heartache, triumph, and self-discovery into a rich tapestry of human emotion. Each character breathes with a vitality that is both flawed and deeply authentic, inviting readers to find fragments of their own joys, sorrows, and hopes mirrored within their arcs. With every twist and revelation, the narrative doesn’t just unfold it envelops, immersing the reader in a world that feels at once timeless and intimately familiar. This is not merely a story to be read, but a profound emotional experience to be felt, savored, and revisited. It leaves an indelible imprint, echoing long after the final page has been turned.
6/16 c24 Hikari3274
Flaws aside, there's nothing wrong with the other part of the story other than powerscaling, i sincerely hope that Issei will start snowballing in the next few chapters.
Flaws aside, there's nothing wrong with the other part of the story other than powerscaling, i sincerely hope that Issei will start snowballing in the next few chapters.
6/15 c22 Hikari3274
I always hate when he just talks while fighting and ended up letting his target (who should be killed) get away. Its one of the most annoying tropes ever.
Also the leveling is so painfully slow for it to show progress, having a gamer system should've let Issei get close to or surpass both Sona and Rias but you make him feel like he is still insignificant (he's not even lvl 20 yet ffs), it feels like you just throw out random numbers like the exp gains (for example after he beats Raynare & co he says he's close to leveling up like 99% close, after he went and decimate the strays he didn't even level up). I know High class devil is way stronger than humans but come on, Issei have 2 sacred gears (while he neglects the Boosted Gear for the most part). Readers also have no comparison to his stats in order to feel the progress he had been going through (in comparison to some of Rias or Sona's Peerage members).
I always hate when he just talks while fighting and ended up letting his target (who should be killed) get away. Its one of the most annoying tropes ever.
Also the leveling is so painfully slow for it to show progress, having a gamer system should've let Issei get close to or surpass both Sona and Rias but you make him feel like he is still insignificant (he's not even lvl 20 yet ffs), it feels like you just throw out random numbers like the exp gains (for example after he beats Raynare & co he says he's close to leveling up like 99% close, after he went and decimate the strays he didn't even level up). I know High class devil is way stronger than humans but come on, Issei have 2 sacred gears (while he neglects the Boosted Gear for the most part). Readers also have no comparison to his stats in order to feel the progress he had been going through (in comparison to some of Rias or Sona's Peerage members).
6/12 c24 cameronhenderson010904
I think someone on webnovel has copied your story all the way to the summary
I think someone on webnovel has copied your story all the way to the summary
6/11 c24 
5Shodaime Gahokage
the crawling chaos floor could use Laḫmu when fully upgraded
[Larval Stage Laḫmu]
roaming around taunting labyrinth challengers. tend to use "zerg rush" tactic, and "false death"
[Bel Laḫmu]
in more open areas can fly and use minor beam attack
[New Eleven Offspring]
boss of the stage start as eleven human shaped with tentacles on their back. as soon as two of them are killed the corpses start to combine around a twelfth core preparing for phase two of the battle: the Chaos Tide.
[Chaos Tide] send out simulacres that take the form of the party of labyrinth challengers to attack.
The simulacres are part of it so they respawn until the core of the primordial sea is destroyed.
wiki/La%E1%B8%ABmu
5Shodaime Gahokagethe crawling chaos floor could use Laḫmu when fully upgraded
[Larval Stage Laḫmu]
roaming around taunting labyrinth challengers. tend to use "zerg rush" tactic, and "false death"
[Bel Laḫmu]
in more open areas can fly and use minor beam attack
[New Eleven Offspring]
boss of the stage start as eleven human shaped with tentacles on their back. as soon as two of them are killed the corpses start to combine around a twelfth core preparing for phase two of the battle: the Chaos Tide.
[Chaos Tide] send out simulacres that take the form of the party of labyrinth challengers to attack.
The simulacres are part of it so they respawn until the core of the primordial sea is destroyed.
wiki/La%E1%B8%ABmu
6/5 c24 lukeanimelover
I really hope Issei becomes a Devil ngl. I usually love the human independent fics, but for some readon, i just really want this version to be a devil.
Or at the very least, i hope his identity is revealed soon, getting to read the drama of Rias trying to get Issei to join her Pireage is overdone, but always very satasfying to read.
I really hope Issei becomes a Devil ngl. I usually love the human independent fics, but for some readon, i just really want this version to be a devil.
Or at the very least, i hope his identity is revealed soon, getting to read the drama of Rias trying to get Issei to join her Pireage is overdone, but always very satasfying to read.
6/4 c11 lukeanimelover
Im getting a little bored of the whole solo thing, i wish Rias was a little nosier and began causing drama with him. It wouldve certainly be entertaining to read.
Im getting a little bored of the whole solo thing, i wish Rias was a little nosier and began causing drama with him. It wouldve certainly be entertaining to read.
6/4 c3 lukeanimelover
You keep usinf “hell” like a cuss word. Is thjd a Dxd thing or is Issei jjsy very bad at cussing?
You keep usinf “hell” like a cuss word. Is thjd a Dxd thing or is Issei jjsy very bad at cussing?
5/30 c10 football78
Umm has Age used his boost skill at all recently, ot seems like you forgot about the red dragon emporeor
Umm has Age used his boost skill at all recently, ot seems like you forgot about the red dragon emporeor
5/30 c14 4Themissionhasstarted
So Rias' brother and Sonia's sister new who Issei was the entire time?!
4ThemissionhasstartedSo Rias' brother and Sonia's sister new who Issei was the entire time?!
5/28 c24 Starstrider
Really good so far. I think the most interesting change to issei is no doubt the increase in wisdom and intelligence combined with gamers mind.”Gaia” or the will of that gear has hugely diverted isseis course of development. The only thing I find questionable is hiding his status as red dragon emperor but going around in completely red armor and destroying everyone with high physical stats as a human. Pretty shad, but I guess red could be a coincidence and gamers obviously get high stats as well.
Really good so far. I think the most interesting change to issei is no doubt the increase in wisdom and intelligence combined with gamers mind.”Gaia” or the will of that gear has hugely diverted isseis course of development. The only thing I find questionable is hiding his status as red dragon emperor but going around in completely red armor and destroying everyone with high physical stats as a human. Pretty shad, but I guess red could be a coincidence and gamers obviously get high stats as well.
5/29 c6 2StorytellerKimi317
Gaia isn’t a Titan. Primordial part was on point though. But Gaia just birthed the Titans.
2StorytellerKimi317Gaia isn’t a Titan. Primordial part was on point though. But Gaia just birthed the Titans.