for Her last words10/27/2016 c1 Magnolia C
Just saying though this fanfic and 'light and free' were both lovely and tear jerking fanfics they are not written how songfics usually are. You wrote your songfic more like a fanfic with songs that go along with it.
Read these songfics for how a songfic is usually done, they are the best songfics I have read in the common style.
Katekyo hitman reborn! songfic: s/11159444/1/Frozen
D. Grayman songfic: s/11164912/1/I-Want-My-Innocence-Back
Danny phantom songfic: s/11177044/1/Human
Naruto songfic: s/2074452/1/And-All-the-King-s-Horses
I feel they all have the same tone as yours even if only the Naruto songfic has romance in it. All amazing stories that leave you in awe at the end of them.
Just saying though this fanfic and 'light and free' were both lovely and tear jerking fanfics they are not written how songfics usually are. You wrote your songfic more like a fanfic with songs that go along with it.
Read these songfics for how a songfic is usually done, they are the best songfics I have read in the common style.
Katekyo hitman reborn! songfic: s/11159444/1/Frozen
D. Grayman songfic: s/11164912/1/I-Want-My-Innocence-Back
Danny phantom songfic: s/11177044/1/Human
Naruto songfic: s/2074452/1/And-All-the-King-s-Horses
I feel they all have the same tone as yours even if only the Naruto songfic has romance in it. All amazing stories that leave you in awe at the end of them.
3/27/2016 c1 
1The Sassy Sylveon
when kakashi asks what wrong and sakura answers there is "laid" not "lied". When Mikoto enters his room you put "song" instead of "son". this was amazing and a tear jerker(had tissues and everything)
1The Sassy Sylveonwhen kakashi asks what wrong and sakura answers there is "laid" not "lied". When Mikoto enters his room you put "song" instead of "son". this was amazing and a tear jerker(had tissues and everything)
3/27/2016 c1 5RushiAei
Whoa this was so sad D: But I sort expected it would be the moment I read the title. I was wondering if you had made this story based off of that song, and I actually heard it for the first time a few months back... Good job writing this. The only thing I wasn't expecting was Itachi letting Sakura go through with it.
5RushiAeiWhoa this was so sad D: But I sort expected it would be the moment I read the title. I was wondering if you had made this story based off of that song, and I actually heard it for the first time a few months back... Good job writing this. The only thing I wasn't expecting was Itachi letting Sakura go through with it.