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4/2/2016 c1 11952013mor
my idea for this page is a jumping stone into story with flashbacks into the backgrounds
3/28/2016 c1 D.Rose
This seems promising, is this part of an actual story or a scene you were thinking of? If an actual story, you may want to write what lead to this scene happening, give us more info on everyone's background in your AU. Unless you are using this as an opening hook to then lead back into the background. Also, you may want to get a beta reader, there are some confusing spelling errors, mainly, the character Shepthine, is this supposed to be Stephanie?
I looked at the other stories you had listed, and feel this goes for them as well. You have some really interesting ideas and I would like to see where you go with them.

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