for Percy Jackson: Son Of Chaos2/19/2017 c3 JadeTalisman
you need to add more detail. The events are moving ahead too quickly. Adding more detail would also help lengthen the chapter
you need to add more detail. The events are moving ahead too quickly. Adding more detail would also help lengthen the chapter
2/19/2017 c3 
5Checkingdude
Okay, just saying, you could have done so much more with this scene. A little dramatic flair and some more of what Percy was feeling and it would be a master piece if done correctly. Just saying.
5CheckingdudeOkay, just saying, you could have done so much more with this scene. A little dramatic flair and some more of what Percy was feeling and it would be a master piece if done correctly. Just saying.
1/31/2017 c2 Guest
More chapters
More chapters
10/30/2016 c1 Smuggle
Epic...
Epic...
8/31/2016 c2 booklover212
Oh my gods plz update its only the being of the story and Percy hasn't met his true parent
Oh my gods plz update its only the being of the story and Percy hasn't met his true parent
7/26/2016 c2 7SpaceGeek8643
Hi! Your story is amazing! Rarely do I click on ones like this, but it caught my attention. The only suggestion I have is cold you undo the centered thing? It cuts off sentences making it hard to read.
I love how you made Order and Chaos get along :)
7SpaceGeek8643Hi! Your story is amazing! Rarely do I click on ones like this, but it caught my attention. The only suggestion I have is cold you undo the centered thing? It cuts off sentences making it hard to read.
I love how you made Order and Chaos get along :)
5/23/2016 c2 1MoonShadowPup
this is a great story so far and I'm excited to say the least, don't listen to the hatters if people say it doesn't make sense. You are a great writer and no matter what try to stay focused on important things like school and extra after school stuff, take your time on getting the next chapter to make sure it is in your view a perfect Luck!
1MoonShadowPupthis is a great story so far and I'm excited to say the least, don't listen to the hatters if people say it doesn't make sense. You are a great writer and no matter what try to stay focused on important things like school and extra after school stuff, take your time on getting the next chapter to make sure it is in your view a perfect Luck!