
3/31/2016 c1 Guest
Very good first chapter
Very good first chapter
3/31/2016 c1 Latherial
Interesting enough, Naruto needs a bit more of a backbone. Looking forward to what happens next.
Interesting enough, Naruto needs a bit more of a backbone. Looking forward to what happens next.
3/31/2016 c1
1insanemaelstorm
Great chapter. Liked how you portrayed the different characters. Did wish that naruto was a bit more commanding. Looking forward to more

Great chapter. Liked how you portrayed the different characters. Did wish that naruto was a bit more commanding. Looking forward to more
3/31/2016 c1 BigDaddy111
I'm gonna enjoy this ride
I'm gonna enjoy this ride
3/31/2016 c1 Guest
Nice story so far
Nice story so far