10/10 c126 15Andromedanaea
Read the whole thing
Was not wild about the Luna/Merl parring. But you made it work by making her more normal than the book character.
Didn't like the Harry slash Deryl. but the rest of the story is good enough I can skip that.
mpeg is just plain stupid!
My main problem with recent chapters are there are just too many characters and none of them are getting enough attention. Also, you don't have and understanding of geography. On the Show, they made it to Virginia after traveling for a long time and in the opposite direction for Fort Banning. You are having people travel long distances without teleporting. Virginia should be too far away without apparition of port keys.
Read the whole thing
Was not wild about the Luna/Merl parring. But you made it work by making her more normal than the book character.
Didn't like the Harry slash Deryl. but the rest of the story is good enough I can skip that.
mpeg is just plain stupid!
My main problem with recent chapters are there are just too many characters and none of them are getting enough attention. Also, you don't have and understanding of geography. On the Show, they made it to Virginia after traveling for a long time and in the opposite direction for Fort Banning. You are having people travel long distances without teleporting. Virginia should be too far away without apparition of port keys.
10/10 c115 11selenepotter
The river on the West Border of Fort benning is the Chattahoochi. It is a major river and anyone from Georgia or Alabama would know it asit forma the state border
The river on the West Border of Fort benning is the Chattahoochi. It is a major river and anyone from Georgia or Alabama would know it asit forma the state border
10/9 c92 selenepotter
Female White tailed deer (the kind of deer that live in Georgia) NEVER have antlers or horns
Female White tailed deer (the kind of deer that live in Georgia) NEVER have antlers or horns
10/6 c126 Guest
I need more of this
I need more of this
10/8 c19 15Andromedanaea
Georgia is not that cold in the winter. One snow a year. Britain has worse winters and more snow. Still, they will need winter clothing and shelter in the winter. 20 nights are common. But the sunlight in the daytime warms you up a lot.
Georgia is not that cold in the winter. One snow a year. Britain has worse winters and more snow. Still, they will need winter clothing and shelter in the winter. 20 nights are common. But the sunlight in the daytime warms you up a lot.
10/4 c126 Guest
Excited to meet the twins.
Has the fate of the Magical population at large in the U.S. been determined. I expect many made their way to the school, but not all that still live am sure. Are there other hybrid communities out there. There must be and do they pose a credible threat.
Excited to meet the twins.
Has the fate of the Magical population at large in the U.S. been determined. I expect many made their way to the school, but not all that still live am sure. Are there other hybrid communities out there. There must be and do they pose a credible threat.
9/17 c125 Dixie.f.9
Harry you have the different cities working together to build a new and better world. Everyone’s still in survival mode but now there is more normality to it. They can sleep without worrying about walkers finding them.
Harry you have the different cities working together to build a new and better world. Everyone’s still in survival mode but now there is more normality to it. They can sleep without worrying about walkers finding them.
9/13 c126 shirley
me encanta esta historia amigui y hasta ahora ha sido buenisima quiero que la termines pero no con prisas para que no dañes lo que has logrado
la mayoría de tus historias tambien son geniales
me encanta esta historia amigui y hasta ahora ha sido buenisima quiero que la termines pero no con prisas para que no dañes lo que has logrado
la mayoría de tus historias tambien son geniales
9/14 c1 Soul Sendant
More mentally ill retard nonsense. Faggots have no place in society and neither do the even more confused trans gender garbage thats popping up. We dont need to support these suicidal, future school shooters. We need to remove this mental illness from society with extreme prejudice.
More mentally ill retard nonsense. Faggots have no place in society and neither do the even more confused trans gender garbage thats popping up. We dont need to support these suicidal, future school shooters. We need to remove this mental illness from society with extreme prejudice.