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4/2/2016 c1 Guest
I like this oneshot and how it builds on the relationship between the order and Allen. To be honest, the only suggestion I have is make your sentences shorter. It helps create a tone that shows pain and weariness, in my experience. Keep writing!
4/1/2016 c1 woof
please make this a story it has potential!
4/1/2016 c1 1HelloKittyPower11
Please continue it as a story.

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