for Youth12/24/2024 c1 Shadow fox rose
I really enjoyed reading this story. I like how you wrote the development of sonic and amy relationship over the years. And showing sonics thoughts as they slowly change. I'm surprised there are very few people who review this story. I thought it was good anyway bye. Take care.
I really enjoyed reading this story. I like how you wrote the development of sonic and amy relationship over the years. And showing sonics thoughts as they slowly change. I'm surprised there are very few people who review this story. I thought it was good anyway bye. Take care.
4/2/2016 c1 
3Slide In The DM
Honestly, this was one of the best one-shots I've ever read. The songs you chose had a relation to the story, making it even better. Their interactions and friendship felt very real- not too much fluff. Sonic's view on Amy was funny at parts, acknowledging her rather large behind, seeing her in a swimsuit, and how powerful she became. I like how Amy was portrayed in this story, a very casual teen and maybe a bit tomboyish, too. I also how you hinted at the self consciousness of Amy's body and body issues, too. (Thigh gaps)
I could feel Sonic's hesitation right through the screen- the confession was lovely too! Ah, you've got a favorite. I could go on and on about this.
3Slide In The DMHonestly, this was one of the best one-shots I've ever read. The songs you chose had a relation to the story, making it even better. Their interactions and friendship felt very real- not too much fluff. Sonic's view on Amy was funny at parts, acknowledging her rather large behind, seeing her in a swimsuit, and how powerful she became. I like how Amy was portrayed in this story, a very casual teen and maybe a bit tomboyish, too. I also how you hinted at the self consciousness of Amy's body and body issues, too. (Thigh gaps)
I could feel Sonic's hesitation right through the screen- the confession was lovely too! Ah, you've got a favorite. I could go on and on about this.
4/1/2016 c1 7MissMJS
Aww, so cute! I would die and go to heaven if this really happened! But, alas, Sega and Archie are jerks! D,X
Oh well, this one-shot makes up for it! :D
Great job, as ususal!
7MissMJSAww, so cute! I would die and go to heaven if this really happened! But, alas, Sega and Archie are jerks! D,X
Oh well, this one-shot makes up for it! :D
Great job, as ususal!
4/1/2016 c1 Aqua Safire
I absolutely enjoyed reading this. I've been waiting for some Sonamy for ages! Job well done. The only advice I can give you would be to be careful with the aligning of the paragraphs, like when there would usually be something like a stanza after every set of lyrics. It just kind of seemed a bit odd as to whether it was becoming a poem all of the sudden. But, who knows? It just might be me. Oh well. Anways, keep writing, it was great story and I hope you have many more!
I absolutely enjoyed reading this. I've been waiting for some Sonamy for ages! Job well done. The only advice I can give you would be to be careful with the aligning of the paragraphs, like when there would usually be something like a stanza after every set of lyrics. It just kind of seemed a bit odd as to whether it was becoming a poem all of the sudden. But, who knows? It just might be me. Oh well. Anways, keep writing, it was great story and I hope you have many more!