
4/23/2016 c3 Elias Nick
I think I pick up would be nice, seeing nick realize more and more on how much he loved her it would be cute! Good job can't wait for the next chapter!
I think I pick up would be nice, seeing nick realize more and more on how much he loved her it would be cute! Good job can't wait for the next chapter!
4/22/2016 c2
4The Beginning of Talent
I would most definitely appreciate a fic that follows where this one left off. I have to say, the added on chapter complemented the first two so well. I think it really added even more depth to Nick and Judy. I love it!

I would most definitely appreciate a fic that follows where this one left off. I have to say, the added on chapter complemented the first two so well. I think it really added even more depth to Nick and Judy. I love it!
4/21/2016 c3 LegislativeRights
No way the introspection made it boring, it actually made the story more enjoyable. It was like gettong a inside look on how nick, i consider this a AU, but so far It's one of my favorites, Great Job on the story glad you took whoever's advice to keep going :D
No way the introspection made it boring, it actually made the story more enjoyable. It was like gettong a inside look on how nick, i consider this a AU, but so far It's one of my favorites, Great Job on the story glad you took whoever's advice to keep going :D
4/20/2016 c3 greenleaf62
I must say that that 3rd chapter from Nick's perspective was one of the greatest things I have ever read. Literally perfection :)
Also, I vote for a time jump into the future.
I must say that that 3rd chapter from Nick's perspective was one of the greatest things I have ever read. Literally perfection :)
Also, I vote for a time jump into the future.
4/20/2016 c3
1KazzyFox
Suggestion; Continue from where you left off at the end of Chapter 2. I'd really like to see that. This has been good so far, and I'm looking forward for more to be made!

Suggestion; Continue from where you left off at the end of Chapter 2. I'd really like to see that. This has been good so far, and I'm looking forward for more to be made!
4/20/2016 c3
14Berserker88
Oh wow, I didn't expect you to continue this! And here I was feeling silly for putting a follow on a completed fic. I like the idea of you jumping around the timeline like this, good for adding perspective. I like both of those ideas, but I think I would want to see the direct continuation a bit more first. I'm curious what the reaction of Judy's parents and others would be. :)

Oh wow, I didn't expect you to continue this! And here I was feeling silly for putting a follow on a completed fic. I like the idea of you jumping around the timeline like this, good for adding perspective. I like both of those ideas, but I think I would want to see the direct continuation a bit more first. I'm curious what the reaction of Judy's parents and others would be. :)
4/20/2016 c3 catakaoe
I just loved your prequel! Thanks for writing it! It's wasn't boring at all.
And about your question, personally I prefer another prequel or a different new story about them, than a sequel. Don't take it in the wrong way, its just that I prefer all the previous steps before romance rather what happens after they are already a couple.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more fics from you :D
Cheers!
I just loved your prequel! Thanks for writing it! It's wasn't boring at all.
And about your question, personally I prefer another prequel or a different new story about them, than a sequel. Don't take it in the wrong way, its just that I prefer all the previous steps before romance rather what happens after they are already a couple.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more fics from you :D
Cheers!
4/20/2016 c3 Guest
Not boring at all, Nicks introspection is a great way to bring about the topics needing to be brought up in a way that's familiar to the audience. His side is refreshing to hear. Now we get Judy?
Not boring at all, Nicks introspection is a great way to bring about the topics needing to be brought up in a way that's familiar to the audience. His side is refreshing to hear. Now we get Judy?
4/20/2016 c1
2JustNibblin
Ahhg... why doesn't fan allow editing of reviews?
Just wanted to say that the blueberry perfume was a nice touch. I liked the subtle hints that someone who is not Nick may be sublminally thinking about a relationship as well...

Ahhg... why doesn't fan allow editing of reviews?
Just wanted to say that the blueberry perfume was a nice touch. I liked the subtle hints that someone who is not Nick may be sublminally thinking about a relationship as well...
4/20/2016 c3
4Comet Moon
That was a great prequel. Thanks.
Cough*Sequel*Cough.
Love to see your interpretation of family and friends, and enemies as well.
Thanks again.
CM

That was a great prequel. Thanks.
Cough*Sequel*Cough.
Love to see your interpretation of family and friends, and enemies as well.
Thanks again.
CM