for Broken Dreams5/15 c1 AmeliaJane9299
This story skillfully blends everyday life with supernatural intrigue, deepening Ichigo’s character through family bonds and his evolving Quincy heritage. The mix of heartfelt moments, intense action, and rich lore keeps the narrative engaging and fresh. With strong world-building and tantalizing mysteries introduced, it sets a solid foundation for exciting developments ahead.
Plus, i have an idea for your story and would love to collaborate with you!
This story skillfully blends everyday life with supernatural intrigue, deepening Ichigo’s character through family bonds and his evolving Quincy heritage. The mix of heartfelt moments, intense action, and rich lore keeps the narrative engaging and fresh. With strong world-building and tantalizing mysteries introduced, it sets a solid foundation for exciting developments ahead.
Plus, i have an idea for your story and would love to collaborate with you!
5/12 c103 Lunamaxi
This was a fantastic read! I really enjoyed it. It kept me engaged from start to finish, and I found myself really drawn into the world you created. I’d love to hear more about your thoughts while writing this what inspired certain choices? Any behind-the-scenes details you’d like to share? Overall, this piece stands strong as it is, and I just wanted to say I thoroughly enjoyed it. Looking forward to seeing more of your work!
This was a fantastic read! I really enjoyed it. It kept me engaged from start to finish, and I found myself really drawn into the world you created. I’d love to hear more about your thoughts while writing this what inspired certain choices? Any behind-the-scenes details you’d like to share? Overall, this piece stands strong as it is, and I just wanted to say I thoroughly enjoyed it. Looking forward to seeing more of your work!
5/12 c103 
1aitor.rosell.torralba
This may sound controversial but it would be cool for Ichigo to free this domension's Aizen and bring him back to his dimension as a subordinate, this Aizen kinda putiful snd a bit sad, also seems to have learned his lesson in humility. In general having a version of Aizen around to comment and react to stuff is cool as Aizen is cool. Also this Aizen has suffered quite a bit, he was at the height of his dream only to crumble and be forced to watch as everything went to shit due to his actions, without being able to even move or do anything, only to be even robbed if his consciousness and stuffed into a layered soul for thousands of years... It would feel nice and powtic for him to be saved by... Ichigo of all people. Also even if he failed as his dream he can still live them trough Ichigo accomplishing them as hom, or a version of him, had a hand on Ichigo's creation, it would be like... you could what I couldn't... poetic and cool
1aitor.rosell.torralbaThis may sound controversial but it would be cool for Ichigo to free this domension's Aizen and bring him back to his dimension as a subordinate, this Aizen kinda putiful snd a bit sad, also seems to have learned his lesson in humility. In general having a version of Aizen around to comment and react to stuff is cool as Aizen is cool. Also this Aizen has suffered quite a bit, he was at the height of his dream only to crumble and be forced to watch as everything went to shit due to his actions, without being able to even move or do anything, only to be even robbed if his consciousness and stuffed into a layered soul for thousands of years... It would feel nice and powtic for him to be saved by... Ichigo of all people. Also even if he failed as his dream he can still live them trough Ichigo accomplishing them as hom, or a version of him, had a hand on Ichigo's creation, it would be like... you could what I couldn't... poetic and cool
5/3 c13 Techgabe
Ichigo better unlock Sode no Shirayuki’s Bankai. I hope Shiro and Ossan are gonna keep both Blut Vene and Hierro perma-active during the fights. I’ll laugh if he copies/takes Yhwach’s [ALLMIGHTY]. That way, he can make more physical defences for himself. You can ALWAYS use more defense
Ichigo better unlock Sode no Shirayuki’s Bankai. I hope Shiro and Ossan are gonna keep both Blut Vene and Hierro perma-active during the fights. I’ll laugh if he copies/takes Yhwach’s [ALLMIGHTY]. That way, he can make more physical defences for himself. You can ALWAYS use more defense
5/1 c103 Guest
very interesting lore being revealed
very interesting lore being revealed
4/20 c8 LongSongSilver
Every time the author decides to use "Konnichiwa" all I can imagine is Keanu Reeves in the movie Street Kings.
Every time the author decides to use "Konnichiwa" all I can imagine is Keanu Reeves in the movie Street Kings.
4/15 c8 LongSongSilver
oh man, I'm suddenly remembering why I only made it like 20% of the way through this novel first time I tried reading it. The insistence on using Japanese terms or phrases that are almost always translated to english is just frustrating. especially when its random.
Everyone else is using their accepted translated name, but apparently Sona gets stuck with the Romaji SHITori instead of the widly accepted Sitri
its still Asia, not Āshia Arujento
its still Rias, not Riasu Guremorī
oh man, I'm suddenly remembering why I only made it like 20% of the way through this novel first time I tried reading it. The insistence on using Japanese terms or phrases that are almost always translated to english is just frustrating. especially when its random.
Everyone else is using their accepted translated name, but apparently Sona gets stuck with the Romaji SHITori instead of the widly accepted Sitri
its still Asia, not Āshia Arujento
its still Rias, not Riasu Guremorī
4/14 c3 LongSongSilver
Again, suddenly both Katanas are using the exact same name. whatever happened in the latest editing did some weird stuff.
Again, suddenly both Katanas are using the exact same name. whatever happened in the latest editing did some weird stuff.
4/14 c2 LongSongSilver
So suddenly the two Katanas are named the exact same? whoops. all Yorugetsu, no Kagamigetsu any more.
So suddenly the two Katanas are named the exact same? whoops. all Yorugetsu, no Kagamigetsu any more.
4/1 c102 Guest
glad the punishment went the way it did though if I read correctly then Cardin still needs to be dealt with
glad the punishment went the way it did though if I read correctly then Cardin still needs to be dealt with
3/16 c1 1thedecemater
i really enjoy this story and love reading it but i thought i should let you know that fanfiction is playing up so your recent chapter may not be available to everybody because its either saying 99/101 or 100/101 chapters so if possible please reupload the recent chapter if possible.
i have also tried to address this with the makers of fanfiction but haven't heard anything so please if possible reupload the recent chapter please if possible.
1thedecemateri really enjoy this story and love reading it but i thought i should let you know that fanfiction is playing up so your recent chapter may not be available to everybody because its either saying 99/101 or 100/101 chapters so if possible please reupload the recent chapter if possible.
i have also tried to address this with the makers of fanfiction but haven't heard anything so please if possible reupload the recent chapter please if possible.
3/1 c9 Techgabe
You either MASSIVELY powered up Kokabiel, or MASSIVELY NERFED Ichigo in this chapter. Ichigo is like in the top 10 stringest beings at this point since Sirzechs was ranked 17 i believe when at his peak of power. And Ichigo surpassed him in power when using the Final Getsuga. A power which he by all means should have damn near surpassed by this point. Seriously, just a normal getsuga tenshou from one of his blades while heavily surpressed should’ve been more than enough to wipe Kokabiel from the planet.
You either MASSIVELY powered up Kokabiel, or MASSIVELY NERFED Ichigo in this chapter. Ichigo is like in the top 10 stringest beings at this point since Sirzechs was ranked 17 i believe when at his peak of power. And Ichigo surpassed him in power when using the Final Getsuga. A power which he by all means should have damn near surpassed by this point. Seriously, just a normal getsuga tenshou from one of his blades while heavily surpressed should’ve been more than enough to wipe Kokabiel from the planet.
3/1 c8 Techgabe
I VERY MUCH hope Asia is introduced and taught by Unohana(unless she dies in this story like in canon).
I wanna see a scary Asia.
Like an Asia that uses that face unohana made right before using her bankai.
I VERY MUCH hope Asia is introduced and taught by Unohana(unless she dies in this story like in canon).
I wanna see a scary Asia.
Like an Asia that uses that face unohana made right before using her bankai.
3/1 c4 Techgabe
Ichigo should train with his new powers in his time dilated mind space for half the night. Cuz duh. He got himself a Hyperbalemic Ryme Chamber. Best to make use of it and training his new powers as much as possible when NOT using the armor. Train and get proficient in restricted state and he’ll be even MORE terrifying with the armor on.
Ichigo should train with his new powers in his time dilated mind space for half the night. Cuz duh. He got himself a Hyperbalemic Ryme Chamber. Best to make use of it and training his new powers as much as possible when NOT using the armor. Train and get proficient in restricted state and he’ll be even MORE terrifying with the armor on.